Like I had said before, I am planning to do a few edits to the story which I will do by today or tomorrow.
What I wanted to take your opinion on was: How would you like your Neil Singhania to be - Silent and brooding or fun and cheerful?
I personally go for silent and brooding.
I also want to bring a little more emotional depth to the story. I'm beginning to feel that my characters seem slightly superficial and I want to rectify that.
Do let me know if you have other suggestions.