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Commander's love story

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It is a story of four commander or secret agents. They were best friends. They were secret agents as well as hold other jobs because they can't tell anyone about it. They have a mission and in that mission one by one three of them met the four actually their type of girls. The powerful and brave men felt fragile and weak in front of their love. Here comes fun in this story. There will also romance happen and betrayed also comes that occur due to some misunderstanding. Some mysterious things will. Also occur in it. Hope you guys like this story because it'll be a little strange or different.

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               Alice POV                                            Ding.... Ding....... I woke up due to this i***t Alarm. It distrub my beautiful dreams of me being strong and brave secret agent. I should open my eyes now. Yeah yeah... I open my eyes and see my beautiful room which is filled with the stores of secret agents works. I was lying moving and tossing when my sight hit the clock.                                             "ohhh nooo I'll be late for the class, Aggghh f**k my strawberries" I said to myself and went to bathroom. La... La... La.. La.. Mm.. Mmm. I sing while taking shower. I hear someone calling me but I ignore I enjoyed my bath. After taking bath I wore white shirt and black jeans with white snicker. I went down to get my breakfast and as usual I see my beautiful Mom having beautiful face with anger.                                             "Mis elisa my dearest mom why are you angry", I said to my mom while creasing her face and then I got a shot. "ahhhhh... Mom you should take part in WWE", I said to my mom after getting a slap from her.                                         "Alice you are already late for class go get out and let me take a sigh of relief", mom said to me. " ohhh my darling, you are getting distrub because of me and I love to do it with you" I said to mim and run but while running I got a flying shoes on my arm fortunately otherwise it will directly hit my back of head.                                  I went to my college. Ohhh did I tell you about my studies. If not then let me tell you that I am studying in college to be a future reporter. I love to tell others about crimes and other things happen in country. I entered in my 1st class and as usual I always tried to be late but every time I reach in class 15 min earlier. I always sit in front for full concentration. I went to my seat and sat down. I was seeing the pervious lecture when I hear a a delicate girl talking.                                "Hi, Miss Alice can I sit here?" Girl sat to me causing my jaw dropped and eyes widen. "Hahahahah, mariam stop acting like that. Do you know how funny you look when you tried to become like that", I said to my best friend. Yes Mariam is my best friend since school. We always spend time together,gossip about random things and talk a lot.                                 "Shut up Alice I am just trying to become a sophisticated woman" mariam said to me. "and why are you trying to be SOPHISTICATED baby" I said to mariam that cause mariam to grin. "because I am not like you having a girl body with boy spirit. I want my price charming so I am becoming like that my price charming like me and marry me and have lots of cute kids with me" mariam said while blushing which cause me to laugh out loud. "hahahahahh you and your imagination. I am happy with boy spirit" I to said to her. And yes guys people always say this to me that I have boy spirit in girls body. Isn't it funny. Yes it is but it is more funny because my mother also think that I am boy with girl body. Hahahaha actually I don't believe in Love. I don't focus on or attractive to boys. Ewww like boys are not attracted who stupid attracted towards them. Mmm.... Yeah everyone attracted to opposite gender but I am only attracted towards my work.                                We were talking about some questions of our pervious lecture when a girl of about 5.3ft with brown eyes,long curl hairs but having no volume or no shine, having makeup on face with revealing dress came. She is Fiona. A very popular and sexy girl in our department. Every boy love her. Everyboy on our college want to be her friend. Not only boy but girl also I don't know why. She is a walking cosmetic store. She sat down on her particular seat. Our sir came and lecture start. We all were focused on the lecture when door of our class room opened and a boy of 6 ft tall, broad chest, brown hairs, beautiful black eyes and wearing a jeans shirt came in. Sir stop studying and all Of us focused on him.                              "ohh Haider please come in",sir said to boy whose name maybe Haider. He came and stand near our sir. " Class he is your new class mate. Due to some problems he have to come in middle of year. I hope you all help him in studying which he has missed. Haider go and sit down" sir said to all of us. Like seriously he should wait at the end of year. But its not my problem moreover I hate to talk to boys.                              "So Alice let's go canteen, I am starving". Mariam said to me after our lectures end. Now only one lecture left that is about after 2 hours. "yeah let's go" I said to mariam. We were walking towards canteen. "hey mariam isn't this is our new class fellow what's his name was. Yeah Haider" I said to mariam who werebusy in her own world. "yeah Alice. But why is he roaming around and looking everywhere with suspicious eyes" Mariam said to me. "let's go" I said to her and drag her. We reach near him and he stop looking everywhere.                            "hi Haider" I said to him at which he looked at me like he will eat me. "hi miss whoever you are" he said to me and that's it. Whoever like seriously I am The Topper and he said whoever. f**k his beautiful eyes. "why are you roaming and looking everyone like p*****t" I said to him. " excuse me, I am not a p*****t you poking nose" he said to him. "Who the hell are you calling me that". I said to him with anger. He rolled his eyes " whatever" he said. " you mister p*****t listen I am watching you. If you dare to do anything bad swear to my chocolates I'll make you regret it" I said to him in anger.                           Before getting his reply I grab mariam arm and went out. He is suspicious and I'll found out about him soon. Who do he think he is. He is suspicious and I'll see what he'll do. I must need to talk about him with my uncle. Yes soon I'll talk to him. 

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