Week 1 How to create an initial outline

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1-Hunter and Rebecca were just little kids when they met.  2-Hunter started developing feelings for Rebecca. 3-Rebecca was a beautiful  woman he couldn't resist.  4-Rebecca was actually in love with someone else.  5-Hunter is heartbroken 6-He then meets Lauren.   Hunter was a young boy who lived near the coast who met Rebecca one day while wandering on the bank of the seas. Rebecca also noticed him and went up to talk to him and started a conversation with him tangling his heart into her hands. That's where their friendship began.  As the time passed they became older. No matter how older Rebecca became her beauty never went away. Her beauty attracted his heart and Hunter thought was he catching feelings for her? Yes he was.  Rebecca was a beautiful woman with long dark brown hair and beautiful Emerald like green which were so attractive no one could resist. Her smooth and clean white face was just so perfect the sun's beauty couldn't even compare.  One day hunter is off to propose to Rebecca, finally. He gathered up the courage to propose to her. That day he saw that before him someone else had already proposed to her. She said yes to him. How could she say yes to him. Didn't she love Hunter! He fell down on his knees and tears came out his eyes. They came out so quickly and it felt so hurt. The ring even tumbled down into the ocean. Rebecca didn't even look back at him. Hunter is just so heartbroken. He doesn't go out like he used to. He is always just in his room crying his tears out. He doesn't even eat. He doesn't even want to be near sunlight. He doesn't want to go to the beach again. His frustration was getting the better of him. He would scream. He would get horrible nightmares. He could have just grabbed a knife and stabbed himself to death. He just wanted to stab 'Rebecca's new fiance' if he could. Rebecca was his light. His hope to being perfect. If only Rebecca had been with him he would have treated her like the queen she was. He just wasted his whole life chasing after her while she was chasing after the other man. Why? Why was he after her so bad. Why couldn't he let go of him. He was just so depressed after Rebecca left. He couldn't help it.  he was then forcefully told by his mom to go outside and get some groceries. He went to the market when he tripped ad fell. He looked up at the thing he had hit. It was a girl. She had blonde hair and blue eyes. She apologized and asked for his name. He said it was Hunter. She blushed and walked away. He felt like this was the one for him. Finally someone who loved him or was it something else. 
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