GRACE ARRIVES

GRACE ARRIVES

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GRACE ARRIVES

One fateful day, Glorious was sitting in a lecture hall at the University of Lagos, where she was studying Law.

Glorious was one of the best students in her department. She was also a hardworking young woman who ran a small tailoring business to support herself financially while in school.

As she rushed out of class with some of her classmates, she accidentally hit her right side against a door. Suddenly, she felt a sharp pain in her right breast.

She became worried.

Glorious was a day student and lived with her parents in an apartment not far from the university. Her family was financially average. She was the first daughter, with three younger brothers.

That Saturday, since she had no lectures, Glorious decided to visit a hospital to find out what was happening.

After registering at the hospital, the receptionist directed her to the doctor's office. The doctor examined her and, after some tests, confirmed that she had a lump in her right breast.

Glorious was shocked.

Glorious: “Oops… Doctor, will I be okay? Can it be removed?”

Doctor: “Yes. It can be removed through surgery.”

The doctor explained that the surgery would cost about ₦200,000.

Doctor: “Don't delay the surgery. It is better to remove the lump as soon as possible to avoid possible complications. When you come for the surgery, don't eat anything that morning.”

Glorious: “Okay, Doctor. I won't waste time. I will get it removed as soon as possible.”

She returned home and told her parents the news.

Her mother was heartbroken.

Mother: “My dear daughter, don't be afraid. By the end of the month, we will raise the money for your surgery. Everything will be fine.”

Glorious: “Alright, Mum. Thank you.”

The following Monday, Glorious returned to school. It was her second-semester examination, and she was preparing to move into her second year.

She wrote her examination, spoke briefly with her friends, and returned home.

But as the days passed, the pain in her breast became worse.

The middle of the month had arrived, yet her parents were still struggling to gather the ₦200,000 needed for the surgery.

Glorious had no choice but to endure the pain and wait.

She remained strong and continued believing that everything would work out.

Finally, the end of the month arrived.

Her parents were able to raise the money, and Glorious underwent the surgery.

By the grace of God, the surgery was successful.

The lump was removed, and the pain she had endured for weeks was finally gone.

Glorious continued her education and eventually graduated from the University of Lagos.

She went on to pursue her master's degree.

After completing her master's, Glorious got married to a responsible and wealthy man. Together, they were blessed with three beautiful children.

Looking back at everything she had gone through, Glorious could only smile and say:

“When I thought my story was ending, grace arrived.”

THE END