Week 7: How To Create Description?
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ORIGINAL DESCRIPTION
Kirsten Collins likes to travel so much. She would spend her weekends and holidays going to the beach, going to different kinds of museums, hiking with her friends, exploring the beautiful country of the Philippines and many more to mention. But the thing is.... that was before. She definitely has a different life now compared to her extreme life before.
Lucas Wolff, a young man who also loves to travel, used to be Kirsten's schoolmate. He doesn't know Kirsten personally but he knows how much she loves to travel around the country. Since he also loves to travel he really wants to make one of his dreams come true; to travel with Kirsten. But will his dream come true if he has no idea where Kirsten is now? Will he ever find her again or his dream to travel with her will just remain as a dream?
ENHANCED DESCRIPTION
Kirsten Collins likes to travel. Ever since she turned 16, her parents allowed her to travel because at a very young age she already knew what she wanted in her life; to travel. May it be going to the beach, museums, hiking with her friends and the like. But that was before because something happened that changed Kirsten’s extreme life.
“What is it like to travel with your favorite traveler?” Lucas Wolff, a young man who also likes to travel, always asked himself that question. He used to be Kirsten’s schoolmate. He doesn't know Kirsten personally but he knows how much she loves to travel around the country. Since Lucas also loves to travel, he really wants to make one of his dreams come true; to travel with Kirsten.
Will his dream come true if he has no idea where Kirsten is now? Will he ever find her again or his dream to travel with her will just remain as a dream?
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