TheThing in The Alley

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Evelyn Mercer POV *****10:41 PM – Blackwood & Co. Books, Seattle | Closing Shift***** I should’ve gone home earlier. That was the first thought that hit me when I locked the bookstore door behind the last customer. My body felt wrong in that familiar way again. Not pain exactly. More like my insides were arguing with my decision to stay upright. I leaned against the glass for a second. Rain outside. Always rain. Seattle never seemed to run out of it. “Mina already left?” I asked the empty space beside me, even though I knew she had. I checked my phone. No messages. Good. Normal night. That lie lasted exactly twelve seconds. Because my vision tilted. Just slightly. Not enough to fall. Enough to feel it. I exhaled slowly. “Don’t do this now,” I muttered to myself. I stepped away from the door and started walking. Each step felt heavier than the last. My body wasn’t tired. It was giving warnings. Ignored them anyway. *****11:03 PM – Alley Behind Blackwood & Co. Books***** The shortcut home was stupid. I knew that. Mina would’ve yelled at me for it. But the main street was too bright tonight. Too many people. Too many eyes I didn’t want to answer questions to. So I took the alley. Bad choice. The moment I turned into it, the sound changed. Rain didn’t feel like rain anymore. It felt… heavier. Muted. Like something had wrapped fabric around the world. I stopped walking. Something was wrong. Not fear exactly. More like recognition of absence. No footsteps behind me. No distant cars. No city noise. Just me. And the alley. My fingers tightened around my bag strap. “Okay,” I whispered. “This is not funny.” A breath. Another step forward. Then my legs gave out. Not dramatically. Not like in movies. Just… failure. My knees hit the wet ground. Cold hit fast. My lungs forgot the rhythm for a second. I pressed a hand to the brick wall. “Perfect,” I muttered. “Of course. Great timing.” My vision blurred slightly. I blinked hard. Focus came back in fragments. And that’s when I saw it. At the far end of the alley. Something standing where there shouldn’t be anything. At first it looked like smoke. Then it looked like a shape inside smoke. Then it looked like it noticed me noticing it. My throat tightened. “No,” I said quietly. “No, no, no…” The smoke shifted. Not moving like wind. Moving like intention. It stepped forward. If it could be called stepping. My body reacted before my brain did. I pushed myself back against the wall. My hand slipped slightly on wet brick. “I’m hallucinating,” I whispered. “This is just….this is just….” The shape got closer. And then it wasn’t far anymore. It was in the alley with me. No face. No eyes. Just density of smoke pretending it was alive. My breath stopped. My chest hurt instantly. I tried to stand. Failed. “Okay,” I whispered again, smaller this time. “Okay… I get it. I’m tired. I’m stressed. This is… this is….” The thing tilted. Like it was listening. Then it moved. Fast. Not walking. Sliding. My body froze completely. And then. A voice cut through the air. Not loud. Not sharp. Controlled. “Do not move.” Everything stopped. Even me. Because that voice didn’t belong to this alley. Or this world. Kairen Vale stepped into view from the mouth of the alley. Same black coat. Same stillness. Same suffocating calm. He didn’t look at me first. He looked at the smoke thing. Like it was inconvenience. Not threat. Just problem. The air changed immediately. Pressure dropped. My chest tightened harder. The smoke creature hesitated. That was new. It hesitated. Kairen finally spoke. “You’re early.” His voice was low. Even. Almost bored. The creature shifted toward him. Kairen didn’t move. Not even slightly. Then he lifted his hand. Two fingers. That was it. The alley darkened. Not from shadow. From something deeper. The smoke thing tried to retreat. It didn’t get the chance. It broke. Not exploded. Not burned. Just… erased in sections. Like reality decided it wasn’t worth keeping. The alley filled with a silent pressure wave. My ears rang. Then nothing. Empty air. Just rain again. Normal rain. Too normal. My body slowly remembered how to breathe. Kairen lowered his hand. Like nothing happened. Then he looked at me. That was worse than the creature. Because his expression didn’t change. Not concern. Not anger. Not relief. Just assessment. “You’re late,” he said. I stared at him. “…What the hell was that?” He didn’t answer immediately. He stepped closer instead. Each step quiet. Deliberate. The kind of movement that didn’t waste energy. Didn’t hesitate. He stopped a few feet away from me. Looked down. My body was still on the ground. Too weak to care about dignity now. “You’re bleeding internally,” he said. I blinked. “That’s not… what we should be talking about.” He crouched slightly. Not to help me. Just to observe. Like I was a situation. Not a person. “You are attracting them,” he said. “‘Them’?” I echoed. His eyes shifted slightly toward the empty space where the smoke thing had been. “Entities drawn to collapse.” I let out a short laugh. It came out wrong. “Great. So I’m basically a walking buffet now?” He didn’t react to that. “Your condition weakens barriers.” I swallowed hard. “Okay, stop talking like I understand any of this.” Silence. Rain filled it. Then he said: “You summoned me.” “I did NOT summon you.” His gaze sharpened slightly. Not emotional. Just focused. “You did.” “I was drunk and dying and ranting to myself,” I snapped. “That’s not a summoning spell, that’s… depression with alcohol.” He stood up again. Towering slightly over me now. “You spoke with intent.” I stared at him. “…You’re serious.” “I don’t joke.” That should’ve been comforting. It wasn’t. I pushed myself slightly up the wall. “Okay. Fine. Let’s say I did summon you. What was that thing?” He turned his head slightly. Rain slid off his hair. “It responded to your condition.” “That’s not an answer.” “It is the only one you get.” That shut me up for a second. I hated that it worked. I tried standing again. My legs trembled. Failed. Kairen didn’t move to help. Just watched. Like he was waiting to see if I would fall completely. I gritted my teeth. “I’m fine,” I lied. “You are not.” “I didn’t ask for a diagnosis.” He stepped closer again. Stopped just short of me. The air felt heavier near him. Like breathing required permission. “You are delaying the wish,” he said. I blinked slowly. “Oh,” I whispered. “So that’s still your thing.” “Yes.” A pause. Then I laughed again. Short. Tired. “You almost let me get eaten by smoke and your main concern is paperwork.” His gaze didn’t shift. “The entity was minor.” “Minor?” I repeated. “It would have killed you.” I stared at him. “…That’s your definition of minor?” “Yes.” Silence again. Rain louder now. My body was shaking slightly. Cold or exhaustion. I couldn’t tell. I leaned my head back against the wall. “So what now?” I asked. Kairen looked down at me. “You return indoors.” “And if I don’t?” A pause. Then: “You will continue attracting attention until something succeeds.” That landed harder than it should’ve. I swallowed. “You talk like I’m a problem.” “You are not stable.” “Wow. Thank you.” No reaction. No apology. Just truth. He turned slightly as if to leave. I spoke before I could stop myself. “Why are you even here?” He paused. Not dramatic. Just stopped. “I already told you,” he said. “You said a lot of things.” His eyes shifted back to me. “You are still within your forty days.” I frowned. “That’s it? That’s your reason?” “Yes.” I hesitated. “…You don’t care if I live or die otherwise?” Silence. That one lasted longer. Then: “It is irrelevant.” That should’ve hurt more than it did. But I was too tired to pretend I was surprised. He stepped away slightly. Then stopped again. Without turning fully back: “If you die before the wish is made, the contract fails.” I blinked slowly. “So you’re basically babysitting a dying human.” “Incorrect.” I raised an eyebrow. He added, flat: “I am ensuring completion.” That sounded worse. He started walking away again. Then paused one last time. Without looking back: “Do not stay outside again at this hour.” Then he was gone. Not dramatically. No fade. No magic swirl. Just absence. Like he had never been there. I stayed sitting on the ground for a while. Rain soaked through my clothes. My hands were shaking less now. Not because I felt better. Because I was too tired to react. I looked at the empty alley. “…Minor,” I whispered. Then I tried to laugh again. It didn’t work this time. I pulled myself up slowly. Every movement hurt more than I wanted to admit. Halfway out of the alley, I paused. Something felt off again. Not behind me. Not ahead. Around. Like the air had shifted slightly. I turned. Nothing there. Just rain. Just streetlight glow. Normal. I started walking again. And that’s when I heard it. Not outside. Not ahead. Inside the walls of the alley behind me. A faint whisper. Not one voice. Many. Saying my name. Evelyn. Evelyn. Evelyn. I froze. Slowly turned back. The alley was empty. But the walls… were not quiet anymore.
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