š³š„ Okay, now this takes a supernatural, emotional twist ā Rose returning when Len has finally built a new life. Hereās how it could unfold:
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THE SPACES BETWEEN US ā The Return
It was late one evening when Len sat in the nursery, one hand resting on her small but growing belly. Tripp was asleep in their room, tired after another long day of work. The soft hum of the night wrapped around her like a blanket.
Then came the sound ā faint, like footsteps where there shouldnāt be any.
Len turned, heart racing.
And there she was.
Rose.
Not as Len remembered her in the coffin, not broken ā but whole, glowing faintly, eyes wide and wet with tears.
Lenās breath caught in her throat.
> āRoseā¦?ā
Rose nodded, voice shaking.
> āYou married him.ā
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Len stood slowly, hand instinctively covering her stomach.
> āI thought you were gone.ā
Roseās lips trembled.
> āI was. I am. But I couldnāt stay away. Not when⦠not when you chose him.ā
Her voice cracked into something raw, almost childlike.
> āI loved you first, Len. Do you know how it felt? Watching from the other side, watching you move on, laughing, smiling, holding someone else the way you used to lean on me?ā
Tears slid down her face ā but they glowed, like burning glass.
> āI thought⦠I thought it was supposed to be us.ā
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Lenās own tears blurred her vision.
> āRose, I loved you. I still do. But you left me. Not because you wanted to, but because the world took you. And I had to keep living. If I hadnāt⦠I wouldāve died too.ā
Rose shook her head violently, clutching her chest as if the ache could kill her again.
> āBut youāre pregnant, Len. Youāre building a life with him. And Iāll never get to be part of it. Iāll never hold your child, never see you grow old. And it hurts. It hurts so much.ā
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Len stepped closer, trembling but firm.
> āI carry you with me every day. Youāre in the way I laugh, the way I breathe, the way I love. Youāre not gone from me, Rose. But I canāt stop time for a ghost.ā
For a long, painful silence, Rose only stared ā torn between rage and grief, between love and the endless dark she came from.
Finally, her shoulders collapsed.
She sobbed, hands covering her face, the sound not human but heartbreak itself.
Len reached for her ā and for a moment, her hand passed through air, then warmth, then nothing at all.
Rose looked at her one last time, eyes filled with unbearable longing.
> āCherish him, then. But donāt forget me.ā
And with that, she faded, her sobs echoing long after her figure vanished.
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Len fell to her knees, cradling her belly, whispering into the quiet:
> āIāll never forget you, Rose. Never.ā
In the silence that followed, it almost felt like the wind answered ā soft, broken, but real.
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š Would you like me to push this further and make Roseās return not just a ghostly visit ā but the start of something darker? Like her spirit lingering, torn between protecting Len and haunting her because of jealousy?