Special: First Drafts 11
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 11: Fire Evaluation (First Draft)
Lucas and the gargantuans continue their struggles against one another. "We liked your passion.." the men commented.
Lucas asked them, "Are what you all showing was all you've given?" As they break apart and Lucas readied himself, Zanc and Maru happened upon them.
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