Special: First Drafts 12
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 12: Shad Cagney of Aspho High (First Draft)
Everyone turned towards the voice.
In the row of judges, Shad Cagney was sitting with his hands clasped. "Lucas was good, just about achieving the standard that Two Bastions set in…" He slowly opined. "But, don't you think he is simply being a no-go? The emotions were just too hig
