Special: First Drafts 13
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 13: Meeting Mr. Clive (First Draft)
Lucas was still trying to figure it out when Principal Lyns went on. "It was Coach Clive. He will come over later and both of you can get to know each other."
Coach Clive… this name sounded familiar. But he could not recall where he heard it before.
Doll said, "Coach Clive is one of the
