Special: First Drafts 23
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 23: There’s No Other Option (First Draft)
"Is the dosage enough?"
"Add more."
"But that would hurt him."
"He can take it."
Lucas saw eyes startled staring at him. They moved soon after a while.
A woman in front of him, wearing white dress and masks, was holding a syringe.
"Lucas you need to lie down." Lucas knew it wa
