Special: First Drafts 28
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 28: The Girl in the Sick Bay (First Draft)
After the meeting, Principal Lyns left the room and the students. Lucas, Moon and Doll prepared themselves to leave the room as well.
Lucas lifted his backpack, clinging it to his right shoulder, before walking out. He bumped unintentionally to a tall man.
"Hey, you..."
Lucas ca
