Special: First Drafts 14
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 14: Moon’s Parents (First Draft)
As Moon and Doll sat at the balcony not too far from the school, the guy recalled his past. He had been a test subject in the School of Demonic Possession as a child. "Mom.. Dad.. I will find you." the child Moon cried in heartbreak. After all, he had been freed from the school.
But all of h
