CHAPTER FOUR:THE BREAKING POINT
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The evening had been quiet too quiet.
The kind of silence that sat heavily in the room, pressing against the walls like something waiting to happen. The sun had already begun its slow descent, casting a dull orange glow through the small window of their sitting room. Dust floated lazily in the air, undisturbed.
Adaeze stood on a wooden stool in the corner, her small fingers carefully reaching for a plate from the top shelf. She moved slowly, cautiously like someone who had learned that even the smallest mistake could carry consequences.
“Mummy said I should bring it,” she whispered to herself, as though reminding her trembling hands.
Her fingers brushed the edge of the plate.
For a moment, she had it.
Then it slipped.
Time seemed to slow as the plate fell, spinning once in the air before crashing against the tiled floor.
The sound shattered the silence.
Adaeze froze.
Her heart began to pound so loudly it felt like it might betray her. She stared at the broken pieces scattered across the floor, her chest tightening.
From the other room, Chioma’s voice came sharp, immediate.
“What was that?”
Adaeze’s lips parted, but no sound came out.
Footsteps followed.
Slow. Heavy. Deliberate.
Each step felt like a countdown.
Chioma appeared in the doorway, her face unreadable at first. Her eyes moved from Adaeze… to the broken plate… and back again.
“What did you do?” she asked, her voice low, dangerous.
“I I’m sorry, Mummy,” Adaeze stammered, her hands already beginning to shake. “It slipped. I didn’t mean to”
The words barely left her mouth before Chioma stepped forward.
“Sorry?” she repeated, her voice rising. “Sorry will fix it?”
Adaeze instinctively stepped back, nearly losing her balance off the stool.
“I told you to be careful! Is it so hard to do one simple thing?”
Tears welled in Adaeze’s eyes, but she blinked them back quickly. Crying sometimes made things worse.
“I’m sorry, Mummy,” she said again, softer this time.
But the apology only seemed to fuel something deeper.
Chioma’s face tightened, her frustration spilling over, uncontrolled.
“You are always sorry! Always making mistakes!” she snapped. “What is wrong with you?”
Adaeze’s breathing became shallow. Her eyes dropped to the floor.
“I didn’t mean to…”
The slap came suddenly.
Sharp. Loud.
It echoed in the room.
Adaeze stumbled, her small body struggling to steady itself. Her cheek burned where Chioma’s hand had struck her.
“You useless child!” Chioma shouted, her voice trembling not just with anger, but something more volatile. “Since the day you came into my life, it has been one problem after another!”
Adaeze said nothing.
She didn’t cry.
Didn’t scream.
She just stood there, her wide eyes fixed somewhere beyond her mother, as though she had learned to leave her body when things became too much.
But Chioma wasn’t done.
“Do you think life is easy?” she continued, pacing now. “Do you think I enjoy suffering like this? Everything I have lost… everything I am going through… because of you!”
The words hung heavily in the air.
Because of you.
Adaeze’s fingers curled slightly at her sides.
Something in her shifted not loudly, not dramatically but quietly, deeply.
A small crack.
Invisible, but permanent.
“I didn’t ask to be born,” she whispered.
The words were so soft, so fragile, they almost disappeared into the silence.
But Chioma heard them.
And for a split second just a second everything paused.
Her expression flickered.
But instead of softening, her face hardened further.
“Keep quiet!” she snapped, turning away abruptly. “Go and clean that mess before you break something else!”
Adaeze nodded quickly.
“Yes, Mummy.”
She climbed down from the stool slowly, careful not to make another mistake. Kneeling on the floor, she began to pick up the broken pieces of the plate, one by one.
Her hands trembled, but she forced them to be steady.
She had learned.
Always be careful. Always be quiet. Always avoid making things worse.
A small piece of ceramic grazed her finger.
A thin line of blood appeared.
She didn’t react.
Didn’t stop.
Didn’t say anything.
Across the room, Chioma stood with her back turned, her arms folded tightly across her chest. Her breathing was uneven, her jaw clenched.
For a moment, she glanced over her shoulder.
Her eyes landed on Adaeze.
On the small figure kneeling on the floor.
On the quiet obedience.
On the silence.
And something about it unsettled her.
But she pushed the feeling away.
It was easier that way.
Easier than thinking.
Easier than feeling.
Easier than admitting anything.
As Adaeze finished cleaning, she stood up slowly and carried the broken pieces away.
She didn’t look at her mother.
Didn’t say anything.
Didn’t wait for permission.
She simply disappeared into the next room.
And the house fell silent again.
But this time, it was different.
This silence was heavier.
Colder.
More final.
Because something had changed.
Not in Chioma.
But in Adaeze.
She had stopped expecting softness.
Stopped hoping for kindness.
Stopped believing that home was a place of safety.
And in that quiet, unseen moment
A part of her childhood ended.
- Writer
