The Fenris Wolf

Keep Going or Rewrite

I was thinking that i could rewrite this book and start over, or if i should continue writing this one. Please comment and let me know what you guys think I should do! Ill definitely keep writing if you want me to but i don't really like the way this is written and the book i have on the other app i have isn't getting anything so i figured i could move it over here for you guys to read and enjoy. Let me know!

If i rewrite it will be called Fenrir: The God of Strength, and be based off the same thing but different writing style and more interesting than this one is and has turned out to be in my opinion, i can even write a sneak peak for y'all if you want me to, just let me know soon on what you guys think i should do. Ill follow what my fanseaders wish haha

Sneak Peak:

Chapter 1: Chains

Fenrir

I'm going about my day, as usual, running around Asguard and letting the wind blow through my fur before finding my spot and sun bathing in a clearing. My jet black fur soaking up the warming rays of the giant yellow sun as I lay in the soft grass. The trees dancing in the soft but flowing breeze cooling me a bit as I warm in the sun.

"Son, come with me, its urgent." my father, Loki says, I groan and reluctantly push myself up as I notice the fearful look in his eyes as my form towers over him by at least 4 feet.

Even my own father is afraid of me... He recovers, as though he never had that feeling, and turns to lead me to....wherever it is that we're going.

Within minutes I realize, he's taking me to the palace, probably to see Odin. He knows I've been wanting to be more that a wolf in his eyes, wanting to make him proud, almost like Thor but without the childish mistakes.

we stop in front of Odin and we bow, showing our respect to him.

"Rise." His powerful voice is enough to shake the room and make anyone cower with fear, it's riddled with hate and fear as he addresses me.. I can't help but wonder.... Why?

"As foretold by the legends of Ragnarok and reminded to me by Loki, you are now banished and a prisoner forever." he calmly states and slams his scepter on the floor as guards pile on me and wrap chains around my body, I look at my father one last time with all the anger and betrayal I can muster and his face goes pale..

He knew he messed up when I heard those words... everyone knows he is to die before Ragnarok even happens and it is actually Thor who starts it if we actually think about it. I am a wolf so of course I can't talk, but I can mind link.

"Great Odin, please reconsider I am not foretold to kill you it is-"

"SILENCE! THE SENTENCE IS SETTLED AND I WILL NOT CHANGE MY MIND.!!!" He screams at me, at this point I willingly follow and they take me to the Byfrost. They transport me to a world I don't know and before they leave, one guard speaks... 

Thats not the whole chapter just part of it, but yea let me know haha