My professor is in love with me

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Alex’s POV

Thursday arrived the way most Thursdays did — ahead of schedule and without apology.

Alex was at his desk by seven-fifteen, which gave him forty-five minutes before the eight o’clock and was the minimum amount of time he needed to feel prepared, not because the lecture required it — he had taught this unit three times now and could navigate it without notes if necessary — but because preparation was how he controlled the variables he could control, and teaching was a profession of uncontrollable variables, and he preferred to enter each class having done everything within his power to be ready for the ones he hadn’t anticipated.

He was reading back through his revised notes when Diane appeared in his open doorway.

She knocked on the frame lightly, the way people knocked on open doors when the knocking was more announcement than request. She was holding two cups from the faculty lounge — the coffee he had mentioned, in a moment of collegial candour several weeks ago, that he found tolerable if he caught it early before it had been sitting on the burner. He registered this. He registered that she had remembered.

“Early morning,” she said. Not a question. An observation that served as an opening.

“Always.” He sat back slightly — not enough to seem unwelcoming, enough to establish that he was mid-task. “Thanks for that,” he said, nodding at the cup she set on his desk, “but I’ve already got one.” He gestured to the travel mug beside his keyboard. This was true. He had learned, some months ago, to always already have one.

She looked at the travel mug. Then at the cup. Then she smiled with the specific ease of someone who was choosing not to receive information they had been given. “I’ll leave it anyway. You might want a second one.”

She left before he could respond, which was also a choice.

He looked at the cup. He moved it to the far corner of his desk and returned to his notes.

He had thirty-three students now.

He counted this not from the roster but from the room itself, which was a habit — scanning the seats as they filled in the minutes before the hour, noting who was early and who arrived at the last possible second and who was absent and whether that absence fit a pattern or was anomalous. It was not surveillance. It was attention, which was different. Surveillance wanted to catch something. Attention wanted to understand.

Jess in the fourth row, already open to a new page. Marcus in the back, affecting disinterest with slightly less conviction than last week. Three of the middle-row students in a conversation that would end precisely when he began, because they were, underneath the social performance of not caring, students who cared. The usual Thursday morning configuration.

The seat in the second-to-last row, left side — he had noted it as empty on Monday and again on Tuesday, because the student who usually sat there had dropped the course and the gap had the faint wrongness of a missing tooth — was occupied now. Different student. New.

She came in at two minutes to the hour, which was not late but was close enough that she had clearly been moving fast. Dark coat, tote bag with one strap safety-pinned where it had split, a notebook already open in her hands before she reached the seat. She sat without looking around the room the way new students usually looked around rooms — cataloguing, assessing, locating themselves socially. She simply sat and opened her notebook to a blank page and wrote the date at the top left corner.

August 31. He could see it from where he stood. The handwriting was small and even.

He noted her presence the way he had learned to note the things that were outside the expected pattern — not with alarm, not with undue interest, but with the specific register of this is new information and I will account for it. Transfer student. New York. Mid-semester. She had found the right room on the first day, which was not always a given, and she had a notebook open before the lecture started, which told him something about how seriously she was taking the catch-up she was already behind on.

He began.

The lecture was on voice.

Not on grammar — he had done grammar last week and would return to it, but the structural units of a sentence were, in his view, less interesting to teach first than what the sentence was trying to do, what relationship it was trying to establish between the person writing and the person reading. Voice was where that happened. Voice was where a piece of writing became unmistakably itself rather than a general arrangement of correct parts.

“Think of two people telling you the same story,” he said, moving to the left of the room the way he did when he was building toward something. “Same events. Same facts. But one of them you lean toward and one of them you don’t. Why?”

The room considered this.

“One’s more interesting?” Jess, predictably.

“But what makes it more interesting?” He let the question open up. “It’s not the events — we established those are identical. It’s something in the telling. Something in the choices the person makes about what to say and how to say it and what to leave out and where to pause.” He stopped at the board and wrote a single word. VOICE. “That’s voice. And voice is not a style choice, not decoration, not something you add at the end when the real work is done. Voice is the real work. Voice is what makes a reader trust you.”

From the second-to-last row, the transfer student was writing. Not taking notes the way some students took notes — transcribing, mechanical, the hand moving to capture rather than to think. She was writing the way people wrote when the thought was arriving faster than they could get it down, head slightly bent, pen moving with the quick, pressured certainty of someone who was responding to what she was hearing rather than recording it.

He looked away and continued.

He spent forty minutes on voice. He used examples from their reading and from news articles and from advertising copy, because advertising was a masterclass in voice distilled to its most efficient — every word fighting for its right to exist, nothing carried along by inertia. The room was more engaged than Mondays, which was usual; Thursday had a different energy, a slight urgency that came from the weekend being visible from here. He worked with it.

When he circulated the discussion — pair up, take this paragraph, rewrite the first two sentences in an entirely different voice, any voice, as long as it’s a deliberate choice — he moved through the rows the way he always did, listening in on the work, nudging where the work had stalled. The pair in the middle rows who were off-task received a question directed at them specifically, gentle but precise, that brought them back without announcing the detour. The pair near the window who had gone somewhere genuinely interesting got a moment of his attention, a keep going, before he moved on.

At the second-to-last row, she was paired with a student named Tyler, who Alex had assessed early in the semester as a young man of abundant confidence and underdeveloped curiosity — not unkind, not unintelligent, but accustomed to his first instinct being sufficient. She was saying something to him in a low voice. He was nodding with the minimal engagement of someone who had already decided what he thought.

Alex stopped at their desk.

“Tyler. Read me what you have.”

Tyler read. It was the original paragraph with two words changed.

“Okay.” Alex kept his voice even. “What’s the logic behind those changes?”

Tyler offered something vague about making it sound better. Alex asked him to define better in this context. Tyler recalibrated. While he did, Alex glanced at the notebook open in front of the transfer student. She had written two full alternative versions of the paragraph and was halfway through a third, each with a note in the margin about what the voice shift accomplished and what it cost.

He finished with Tyler — redirecting him toward an actual answer, which Tyler arrived at eventually with some satisfaction — and moved on without looking at her again.

He noted what he had seen. He filed it.

The class ended.

He gave the reading for next week and dismissed them and began erasing the board in the particular left-to-right pattern he had developed without deciding to, the way all repeated actions eventually became ritual. The room emptied with its usual tide — the quick exits and the slow-packers and the students who had questions they were building up to asking and the students who were already somewhere else mentally before they’d physically left.

He was three quarters through the board when he became aware that someone was still in the room.

Not hovering, not waiting with obvious intent. Just still there. He finished erasing and turned.

She was at her desk. She had not been packing up — she had been finishing a note, and now she was finishing it, and the small act of completing the thought before leaving was something he noticed because it was what he did too, the refusal to leave a thought half-expressed just because the official container for it had ended.

She looked up. Found him watching. Did not look startled or embarrassed — just looked back, the direct, measuring look of someone who had learned to assess situations quickly and without visible reaction.

“Collins,” he said, which was how he addressed students when he was in the middle of something and keeping things brief. “You’re the Thursday transfer.”

“Yes.”

“You have the syllabus?”

“The department office gave it to me yesterday.”

“You’re three weeks behind on the reading.”

“I know. I’ve done two of the three weeks already.”

He looked at her for a moment. “Office hours are Tuesday, two to four. If the third week gives you trouble, come find me.”

“Okay.”

He turned back toward his desk. Then, without fully planning to, he said — to the desk, to the room in general, in the even tone he used for observations that weren’t instructions:

“The essay on voice. The word limit is eight hundred.” A pause. “You can go to a thousand if you need to.”

A beat of silence behind him.

“Why?” she said.

He picked up the annotated Strunk and White. “Because you’ll have more to say than eight hundred words.”

He heard her close her notebook. The soft sound of her standing, the tote bag strap adjusting. Then the door, quiet and deliberate.

He stood at his desk and did not move for a moment.

That was an unusual thing to say to a student on the first day. It was not unprofessional — it was an extension of a word limit, which he had done before, for students who demonstrated they needed the space. It was within the ordinary run of adjustments a lecturer made. It was fine.

He sat down. Pulled the roster toward him.

Collins, Mary A. Still circled twice.

He pulled up the assignment portal and updated the word limit for her submission. One thousand words. He added a note to himself in the file: strong instincts, writes under pressure, responds to material rather than transcribes it.

This was the kind of note he made for students who might need particular engagement. Academic observation. Professional record-keeping.

He closed the file.

He went to lunch — actually went, which he did not always do, prompted by a text from Joe that said only: did you eat today and to which he could not honestly reply yes — and found a table in the quieter end of the campus dining hall where he could read without it being obvious he was reading, which was a skill he had honed over years of eating alone at busy tables.

Joe called instead of texting back.

“You actually went to lunch.”

“You asked.”

“I ask every day.”

“Today I went.” He moved a cherry tomato to the side of his plate. “How’s the apartment?”

“Great. Gym’s incredible.”

“You’ve been once.”

“It was an incredible once.” Joe’s voice carried the particular warmth of someone who found himself consistently funny and had decided this was a gift rather than a flaw. “How’s the semester?”

“Fine. New student. Transfer, mid-semester.”

“Why mid-semester?”

“Didn’t ask.”

“But you’re thinking about it.”

Alex moved another tomato. “I circled her name on the roster.”

Joe was quiet for a moment in a way that was not the absence of a response but the preparation of one. “You circle students’ names.”

“When they need extra attention. Academically.”

“Right.”

“Stop.”

“I haven’t said anything.”

“You’re about to.”

“I was going to say,” Joe said, with great dignity, “that it sounds like you’re doing your job. Which is what I’d expect. You’re very professional.”

“Thank you.”

“I’m proud of you.”

“Goodbye, Joe.”

He hung up to the sound of Joe laughing and returned to his lunch and his book and did not think about the second-to-last row or the three alternative paragraphs with marginal notes or the direct, unreadable look of someone who had assessed him and found him not-a-threat, which was the look he was used to receiving from students and which had not, today, felt entirely routine.

He finished his lunch.

The faculty mixer that evening was in the Whitmore Hall common room, which was a generous name for a narrow oblong space with three couches and a table that was always slightly too small for the number of people standing around it. These events were theoretically optional and practically mandatory in the specific way of institutional social obligations — attending was unremarkable and not attending was noted.

He arrived at six and found Joe already there, which was both surprising and not, since Joe had a networking event on campus and the boundary between campus events was more porous than it appeared on the schedule.

“You didn’t tell me you were coming,” Alex said.

“I’m a spontaneous person,” Joe said, handing him a glass of something that claimed to be wine.

“You coordinated this.”

“I’m a spontaneous person who plans ahead.” Joe looked around the room with the assessing cheerfulness of someone who found most rooms interesting. “Which one is she.”

“She’s not here. She’s a student.”

“I meant Diane.”

Alex took a drink of the wine, which was not good. “Green blazer. By the window.”

Joe looked. Looked back. “I see the situation.”

“I told you.”

“You undersold it.” Joe angled himself slightly, using the body language of casual conversation as cover for continued observation. “She’s looking over here.”

“I know.”

“Are you going to—”

“Not tonight.”

“Alex—”

“Not at a department event with fourteen colleagues and a cheese plate. I’ll find a proper moment. I’ll do it correctly.”

Joe considered this. “You do everything correctly.”

“Yes.”

“Sometimes that’s the problem.”

Alex looked at him. Joe raised his glass in a gesture that managed to be simultaneously a toast and a point made. Alex looked away.

Across the room, Diane was navigating toward them through the small clusters of colleagues with the unhurried purpose of someone who had decided where she was going and saw no reason to conceal it. She arrived with a smile that included Joe only briefly before settling on Alex with the particular warmth she reserved for him.

“I didn’t know your brother was coming,” she said, in the tone of someone who found this mildly inconvenient.

“Last minute,” Joe said, cheerfully and without apology.

The three of them talked. Alex kept it easy and general — the department, the semester, a conference paper Diane had mentioned she was working on. He was not cold. He was not warm in any specific direction. He was the version of himself he brought to situations that required precise navigation: present, engaged, and carefully without angle.

Diane caught his eye at one point with a look that was meant to communicate something across the conversation — an intimacy of shared understanding that he did not return, holding her gaze for exactly the beat that was socially normal and no more.

Later, walking to the car park, Joe said: “You have to tell her. Sooner.”

“I know.”

“Because that—” Joe gestured back at the building, ”—is a woman who has constructed something in her head and is decorating it. The longer you don’t address it the bigger the construction gets.”

“I know, Joe.”

“And when it comes down—”

“It’ll be worse. I know.” He reached his car. Stood beside it. The campus was quieter now, the evening proper, the lights in the buildings making warm squares in the dark. “I’ll find the moment. This week.”

Joe nodded. He did not say you’ve said that before, which was a kindness. He said goodnight and walked toward his own car.

Alex sat in his for a moment before starting it.

Through the car window he could see the English building, third floor, his office window dark. Down the path that crossed from the faculty building to the student residences, a few figures moving in the evening — students heading back, heading out, the ordinary migration of a campus at seven PM.

He started the car.

He graded papers until ten-thirty. The stack was from Monday’s section — a short response exercise, nothing complex, but he read each one fully because he did not believe in partial attention.

At the bottom of the stack was an assignment submitted through the portal that afternoon, timestamped two-fourteen PM. The transfer student, getting ahead of the catch-up before it became a deficit.

It was the short introductory response — half a page, no formal prompt, just: tell me something true about language and why it matters to you.

He read it.

He read it again.

It was seventy-three words. Every one of them necessary. She had written about her grandmother — not sentimentally, without naming her, just: a woman she had watched make things with her hands, and how watching that had taught her that making something well was a form of speech. That craft was language. That when you made something with care, you were saying: this mattered. I was here. I paid attention.

He sat with it for a long moment.

Then he wrote his comment: “This is the clearest definition of intentionality I have read in two years of teaching this course. Well done.”

He stared at the comment.

It was true. It was also more than he wrote on introductory responses.

He submitted it. He put the stack away. He turned off the lamp.

In the dark office he sat for a moment and thought about the word lines — the ones that existed for good reasons, the ones that kept things functional and fair and clean, the ones he believed in and had never given himself cause to question.

He was not questioning them now.

He was simply aware, in the way you became aware of a wall when you were standing close to it, that they were there.

He went home. He did not think about it.

He was very disciplined about not thinking about things.

It was becoming slightly less effective.