Edited, not much, but a little
Claire's POV
It was very difficult to breathe when you didn't want to. That sentence alone sounds as if I am suicidal, but I'm not, just misunderstood. Ofcourse I would be misunderstood when there's a freaky vampire wannabe licking and rubbing at my neck veins, not as romantic as the movies tell it to be.
Edward would be much more non-bulky compared to this man, and this man isn't very sparkly. To tell the truth, he is attractive. Muscles weren't like body builders, which is a good thing. He looked kind of sexy, in a way. But this isn't something I should be thinking of at the moment. Maybe if I survive this, I can take a writing class and write a novel about this. Maybe, just maybe, it would become famous like those vampire novels I read, and become into a movie. Stay tuned everybody for, cue the dramatic music, 'lovely vampire bites'. Okay, yeah, that definately does not have a ring to it.
I really need to stay focused, I'll think of a cool name later. What would my mother do in a situation like this? I just bit his finger, and my teeth feel horrible.
You ever bite something metal, and the pain spreads and stays for a while? Kind of like a brain freeze, but worse.
She would stay calm ofcourse, but apparently, I am not my mother. I grimaced and started couching as the vampire wannabe was still frozen in place, fingers away from my neck. He was still so close from me. Oh good, maybe he'll be stationed there for the next world war. I really need to get my thoughts together, I sound like a drama queen. I shouldn't overreact, its not like I just got kidnapped and am currently being assulted by a wannabe vampire guy, definantly shouldn't be overreacting.
"Oh geez-" I winced, tongue running over my teeth. "What the hell are you, iron man?" I asked in a very unladylike manner. I let out a tiny whine as I tried to get my hands free from the metal chains bounding me but gave up and slumped in defeat. He was still near me and it was starting to creep me out.
Everything was silent, except for the small chuckle he let out.
"Um, Mr.guy sir, can you plese stop breathing my air and get out of my personal bubble? My mother wouldn't approve of this." I stated, glancing up at his crow black hair. What shampoo does he use to get it looking that silky? Maybe he doesn't shampoo and just uses conditioner? That's not very pleasant. Is that good for your hair? He leaned into my neck, inhaled, and mummbled something.
"Did you just sniff me? What did you say? God, I feel like a peacock who just lost it's color." I stated, confused at the sniffing guy at my neck. He let out a deep chuckle and raised his head a bit, looking into my eyes with amusement.
"I said," He started with a smirk "that you are definantly not your mother. I'm sorry my love, you just smell so delightful." He casually stated while I turned pale.
"Your a freak." I stated, a bit panicked while his smirk faltered a bit. I'm guessing that he wasn't expecting that, his mood dropped to gloomy and he looked calm and collected. He sighed, raising himself and stared at me.
"Your confusing." He stated as I gaped at him.
"Says the wannabe Edward Cullen." I muttered as he growled.
"Who the hell is 'Edward Cullen'?" He questioned, appearing to be tense.
I panicked a bit but the giggle snapped me out of it as both of our necks snapped to the window. The navy blue curtain was moved to the side as a female figure was seated at the window. Her outline looked petite but I couldn't see her face, as it was pitch black, except for the moonlight shining down. The moonlight allowed me to see her bright red hair framing her heart shaped face. He glared at her.
"Get out." He ordered as the girl giggled some more.
"But Atticus," She dragged out the name "you know you shouldnt play with your food." She playfully scolded. I shuddered and felt heat engulf my insides once again as she gave out a vicious chuckle.
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HEY GUYS! I'm so sorry that I haven't updated in a while, I didn't realize that this much time had passed by. :(
I have a few things to announce though. First things first:
* R.I.P. Robin Williams, you will forever be in our hearts for your hilarious personality and kind heart. You will be missed. <3
Everyone says it was suicide but some disagree. I still don't have a clear story on how he passed.
My next announcement issss:
* August 24th is my birthday bitchessssss lol
And next is:
* I ran out of masculine names so I had to look this one up haha how is Atticus? I like it. Anyway, that's all, bye! <3
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