EVA: A MYSTERIOUS CHAPTER

THE LIMBO :THE WAY OF HELL

Drenched in sweat, eva is scared becouse of the dark place where she can't see anyone, so many thoughts running through her mind at the same time.

She doesn't understand what to do now, she turns her eyes everywhere and starts shouting loudly,

"is anyone there ? "

"can anyone hear me ?"

She starts shouting the same thing over and over but she didn't get any answers.

She starts running ahead in the hope that she would see something or find someone but far and wide she can see only one sight: The same dark place and red sky. There was no house, building, car or anything else. It was just an empty, anonymous place.

As soon as she started running a little distance, she felt that her feet were getting hot from below. She walked a little further and her feet started burning more. She saw that the ashes she was walking on were getting hot, she touched the ashes with her hands, she felt that the ground of ashes was getting hot.

Her feets started burning and she started crying in pain and fear. Due to the burning of her feet, she is not able to even stand on ground properly. The sounds of her screams and crying are echoing. There was a burning sensation all over her body and she started screaming even more.

Suddenly it starts raining but as soon as few drops of rain falls. She starts screaming more in pain becouse those rain drops are not ordinary, they are drops as hot as lava and acid which are sticking to her body and burns her. She doesn't understand what is happening, she just keeps crying and screaming in pain. Suddenly the ground beneath her started shaking, all the ashes started sinking inside.

The ashes were falling down somewhere, at the same time eva also started going down slowly, she started sinking with the ashes and within some time she went inside the ground.

She falls in a small pond filled with water and she fainted. When her eyes open she sees that apart from this small pond, there is only deep darkness in this place.

The marks of acid drops have been left on eva's whole body and blisters have developed on her feet. She has burning sensation all over her body. She is still trembling and crying in pain, she was not able to understand what to do now and even if she could see anything in distace, it was just darkness.

now eva started muttering to herself

Eva speaking in a crying voice: "where i am?,which place is this? is this hell? it seems that i am being punished for my sins."

"please get me out of this, it really hurts, i promise i won't do bad things from now on,i have realized my mistakes,i dont want to live in hell."

Someone whispers in eva's ear in strange voice: "This is not hell."

Eva looked back with surprise; There was no one behind.

Eva: So which place is this and where am i !?

Suddenly a strange, scary man like creature crawling on the ground starts approaching eva. There were many wounds and cut marks on his body. he also had a lot of burn marks on his face and weirdest thing that made him creepy was his big smile and his eyes were torn.

The moment eva sees him, she gets goosebumps and her soul starts trembling. She asked in a frightend voice: "Who are you?"

Anonymous: "I welcome you here girl..."

Eva: "welcome? in hell! is this hell ?"

Anonymous: "This is not hell"

Eva: "So what is this, i have been tortured here, i am in pain. If this is not hell then what is it ?"

[ He laughs ]

Anonymous: "[This is just the beginning of the way to hell which is called "limbo".]"

Eva got scared on hearing this, her body become numb. She knew that she made a big mistake by commiting suicide. Before she could say anythig to him, he had already disappeared from that place.

Eva went ahead, she saw a light, she started running slowly towards that light, as she was moving forward the light was going away, so she started running.

she is running with a limp becouse of blisters on her feet Despite being in a lot of pain, eva just wanted to reach that light by whatever it means possible. Now slowly she saw that light coming closer to her she tried to run faster but her legs were not supporting her.

Somehow she reached there and saw that it was a door of the same size as her. she saw that the door looked exactly like the door of her room. And eva notices that something is written on that door. When she looked carefully, it was written "Door -1".

She didn't understand anything then she opened the door, and as soon as she opened the door, a very bright light came and pulled eva inside. [ Slowly light starts decreasing ]

She sees that she is in her room. Then suddenly that [17 years old eva] comes in that room. She was wearing a shiny crop dress, it looked like she was going to a party. [18 years old Eva] is seeing all this and she also knows that this is a memory of hers. [17 years old eva] takes out her father's bank card from her cupboard and puts in her pocket. Suddenly her mother comes.

Eva's mom: "Where are you going without asking me ?"

Eva: "I am going to a party with my friends"

Eva's mom: "It's 8o'clock in the evening, you won't go anywhere"

Eva: [rudely]"I can go anywhere i want"

[Eva's mom held her hand ]

Eva's mom: "Do you talk like this to your mom ?"

[Eva shook her mother's hand hard]

Eva: "You always let didi go anywhere but you forbid me"

Eva ran out of the house,

Her mother was shouting at her from behind but ignoring her, Eva walked away.

Eva gets a call from her friend, Eva tells her that you can pick me from the bank near my house after 10 minutes. Eva is withdrawing money from her father's bank card from the bank near her. Some people see her doing this. There was a lot of silence at the the place it was a deserted road where very few people used to come.[18 years old eva ] watching all this and she knew very well what was going to happen next. {Tears welled up in her eyes} she remembered this memory of her very well. She wished that she could stop all this but she couldn't do anything except watching all this.

[17 years old eva] comes out of the bank ,Then three mens aged about 30-32 years come on a bike and take money from eva. Eva grabs the man's hand and tries to get the money back. The other man slaps her very hard,Eva gets very scared.

[3rd man]: "Look at the dress, todays children are becoming very mordern."

[2nd man]: " by the way, this girl is very good looking, and she also looks much younger than her age."

one of the men grabs her tightly.

She starts crying but she didn't have enough strenght to free herself.

[18 years old eva] screams loudly for help and tries to free her but no one was able to hear her voice,nor was anyone able to see and feel her.

[2nd man]: "If you like wearing such a short dress girl....Then let's make it more shorter"

Hearig all this, eva get goosebumps. She tries to scream loudly but they covered her mouth with their hands. Eva was trying hard to move herself but she was unsable to do anything infront of three mens. Those mens were about to r**e a 17 year old girl in a drunken state, they tore her clothes and started touching her from different places. Seeing all this,[18 years old eva] was crying a lot and screaming. She was seeing all those things coming back that had happened to her a year ago, but before anything else could happen, a car arrives, seeing which they throw eva there and ran away with all her money.

That car stops, there is a boy in it and one of her elder sister who are driving the car. Seeing Eva's condition, they try to pick her up and take her to the car, but eva is so scared that she doesn't even let them touch her. They manages to calm eva and make her sit in the car. The boy's elder sister tells him to give his jacket to her, He takes off his big jacket and give it to eva. Becouse of that jacked her inner clothes were not visible.

boy:"It's big but ok..."

Eva: "hmm"

They drops eva home. Eva just wanted to meet her parents as soon as possible, becouse she was very scared and sad. She wanted to tell everything to her dad and apologize to her mother. As soon as she goes inside the house, her father , seeing her in the boy's jacket, start moving towars her angrily and slaps her hard and seeing that she had his bank card in her hand, after which he shouted at her and asked her to go to the room.

After all this, the heart of [17 years and 18 years old eva] gets shattered.

[18years old eva] starts regretting her mistake, {tears are continuosly flowing from her eyes}. Just then, a bright light again appears in front of her and that light throws her to a different place.

As soon as she looks at that place she gets goosebumps and her eyes go teary,

her whole body goes stiff...

To be continue...