Episode 6-We made it, guys!
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(At the night Club)
Maddie: (whispering) Okay, I've got my camera hidden in my coat. Let's get this shot! (eyes gleaming with excitement)
Tylor: (spotting a group of guys) Oh, perfect targets! (winking)
Addie: (trying to stop her) Tylor, no! (alarmed)
Here's a rephrased version with a more seductive tone and humorous jealousy:
Tylor: (seductively) Well, well, well. Look at you boys having a party all alone. That's so... dull. Why don't I join you and show you how to really turn up the heat? (She whispers, her hands roaming over their bodies, making Addie's eyes widen in a mix of amusement and possessiveness)
Addie: (gritting his teeth, trying to contain his jealousy) Ugh... (he mutters under his breath, his eyes fixed on Tylor's hands as if ready to pounce and reclaim his girlfriend)
Tylor: (interrupting) Watch me make the best shots! (mixing drinks with flair, shaking a beer, and spraying it on their faces) Boom!
Guys: (frustrated) Ah! (fuming) All of them stand up to attack her
Maddie: (standing up, fearful) Oh no! (gasping) She almost stop them but suddenly
Addie: (bravely intervening) Hey, back off! (standing tall)
Tylor: (whispering pitifully) See, they want to hit me! (She hides at his back, her voice trembling like a leaf)
Guys: (sneering menacingly) What are you going to do, brave guy? Hun?
Addie: (trying to sound bold, but his voice cracking with fear) No one is touching her! I'll...I'll teach you a lesson! (He stands tall, his eyes wide with fear, his hands shaking like a leaf, and his voice trembling like a scared puppy)
Maddie: (cheering and whistling) Go, Addie! (pumping her fist)
Guys: Tough guy, who do you think you are! (Screaming)
Addie: Jesssss! Man you mouth stinks... He lean back
Tylor: I can even smell it dude (She whispered to him from his back)
Addie: is all your fault...
Guys: What you guys talking about Hun!
Addie: Damn dude, why are you yelling I am right here, what is it that you were asking?
Guys: I said who are you!
Addie: Yeah, right I am.... He pause thinking.
Tylor: Rahul (She whispered)
Addie: What? She repeated. Yes yes I am Rahul 'Naam tu suna Hoga'
Maddie: (Chuckled) What the hell are those two doing? (Confused)
Guys: What the... Let her apologize now!
Tylor: Never! She said from behind still hiding.
Addie: Yes, exactly! (to the guys) You wanna fight? Like Ya ya yeah! (flexing his muscles)
Tylor: (correcting) i***t, not ya ya poshaa! Poshaa! (laughing)
Addie: (smiling) Yes, exactly that one! (winking)
Guys: You think we are doing Drama here, we will teach you a lesson!
The guys attack, and the friends dodge and break glasses. Maddie whistles and cheers in the background.
They start throwing bottles at the guys trying to escape they final run out and Maddie followed them to at their still shooting.
Maddie: (tired) I'm done running! My legs ache! (exhausted) Hey! Guys!
Tylor tripped and fall and one guy get hold of her
Tylor: 'Bachawoo Bachawoo!' Ah! Help, somebody! (pleading) He is chocking me! (Still being in a character)
The guy: No, I didn't you little brat let me teach you how to chock for real!
Maddie: (knocking out a guy with a rock) Take that! (empowered)
Tylor: (excitedly) Oh, Anjali! You saved me! (grateful)
Maddie: (confused) Who's Anjali? (perplexed)
Tylor: (excitedly) You are Anjali or Pooja! (excitedly)
Maddie: (stunned) Who's Pooja? (baffled) Come on, girl can you quit that and let's run for our lives now!
Suddenly they all left run towards Tylor and Maddie whiles Addie's is still struggling with one person. Maddie uses pepper spray on the guys coming.
(The friends escape as police sirens approach)
Guys: Run! Police run!
Maddie: (panting) Let's run! I'll video you two holding hands escaping! (determined)
Tylor smiled and nodded then hold Addie and run as she said.
(NEXT DAY)
(The three friends lie exhausted on Addie's bed)
Addie: (groaning) I'm so sore... (exhausted)
Tylor: (laughing) That was epic! Best night ever! (grinning)
Maddie: (smiling) I got some great footage! Can't wait to edit it! (excited)
Addie: Can we please eat first
Tylor: Yes, bebs
Addie roll her on him and hug her and the tired Maddie said " Guys not this early morning" She covered her face with pillow
Here is the dialogue with the necessary corrections:
(TALENT SHOW DAY)
Tylor: Hey, are you done with the video editing? It'll be our turn soon.
Addie: Sure, in a minute.
Maddie: Are we really doing this?
Tylor: Maddie, calm down, we're going for it.
The host: And now, we will call MAT to come to the stage and present their talent.
Addie: Who is MAT...
Tylor: No, you mean to say, who are MAT?
(After a while of waiting, they saw Maddie coming up to the stage, adjusting her glasses.)
Maddie: Hello, everyone. (She smiled nervously)
Maddie: (nervously continuing) The thing is, practically...we ain't going to do anything on stage. It's actually a video show, a short film (she stammers) that combines my friend Tylor Robinson's talent and your own, Sweet popular guy (she smiles). The ladies shouted "Addie!" Exactly, Maddox Steven...so have fun! (She gestures enthusiastically)
(Maddie exits the stage, and the lights dim. The first scene begins, showing the friends awkwardly exchanging while doing that staring contest passports at a roadside. The scene cuts to a hilarious Bollywood-inspired montage, they are at the same exact same spots but they keep going up and down like they didn't see each other to return their passport. Maddie playing multiple roles - the mother, father, doctor, and second lead - in various ridiculous disguises. The story unfolds with a comical fight scene, but here they make it as if this is how they met since that day they lost each other,followed by Tylor exclaiming)
Tylor: (excitedly) Rahul, you saved me! And you also saved me! (She hugs Maddie and Addie tightly, nearly suffocating them)
(Maddie's eyes widen in confusion, her face contorted in a "what's going on?" expression. She looks around frantically, her body language screaming "I have no idea what's happening!")
Even the ordinance are confused what is Maddie doing there again.
(Tylor and Addie break into a hilarious Bollywood dance song, complete with exaggerated gestures and facial expressions. Maddie joins in, still looking utterly perplexed but laughing along with her friends)
After the song Maddie somehow disappear as the third person from nowhere left with Tylor and Addie dwelling in their romantic moments.
(Tylor and Addie share a romantic evening, walking hand in hand on the beach)
Tylor: (smiling) I never thought I'd find someone like you.
Addie: (gazing into his eyes) I feel the same way.
They share kiss as the sun sets which is never shown to the student.
(Later, they sit on a hill, watching the stars)
Addie: (dreamily) I wish we could stay like this forever.
Tylor: (softly) Me too.
(They cuddle closer, gazing up at the night sky)
(Days pass, and their time together is filled with laughter and adventure)
Addie: (hesitantly) I have to leave.Since I have my passport back.
Tylor: What happened you are leaving so suddenly in such hurry(concerned)
"Is hard to explain, now but I have to leave" He said to her.
Tylor: What about our love? He pause when she said that but didn't turned around.
Addie: (tearfully) Imagine it never happened.
(Addie leaves, and Tylor collapses in tears, heartbroken)
Days pass, and Tylor determine to find Addie. She arrives at his town, only to learn he's been in a car accident
Maddie (as doctor): (somberly) I'm sorry, Tylor. He's gone.
(Tylor collapses in tears, heartbroken. She rushes to Addie's side, holding his lifeless body)
Tylor: (wailing) No! No! Please come back!
(After minutes of tears, Tylor starts beating Addie's chest, desperately trying to revive him)
Tylor: (frantically) Wake up! Wake up!
(The students in the audience are overcome with emotion, tears streaming down their faces)
(The scene is filled with sorrow and tension, until Addie suddenly coughs and opens his eyes)
Addie: (weakly) Tylor...
(Tylor's face lights up with joy and relief, as she hugs Addie tightly)
(The crowd erupts in applause and cheers, relieved and happy for the couple's reunion)
Tylor screamed and hug Tylor and Addie from the back stage after hearing the noise "Can't believe they loved it, we made it guys!"
In the next scene we saw the three friends with the award taking a selfie.
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