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Rebecca’s POV
I had been avoiding Lysander ever since I realized I tried to seduce him in my drunken state last night.
Even at the dining table, I acted like he wasn’t there, even though he was sitting right beside me.
“You should have this, it’s good for your health.” He picked up a piece of pan-seared chicken and was about to place it on my plate when I blocked it with my fork.
“No, thanks,” I said, my tone coming out sharper than I intended.
What was I supposed to do? This man actually turned me down last night. I’m supposed to do the rejecting, not the other way around.
“What about avocado? You like avocados,” he persisted.
I couldn’t help but roll my eye
