Outside, the storm raged louder, wind tearing at the banners that bore his sigil—a serpent coiled around a blade. The sound made Alator smile again, cruel and certain. The storm was his ally. And soon, it would fall on Valghor.
The storm broke by morning, leaving Alator’s encampment wrapped in a damp chill. Smoke curled from cookfires, mingling with the acrid scent of wet leather and rusting iron. Soldiers huddled in clusters, muttering over bowls of thin stew, their voices low, their laughter forced. Alator could hear the tones of discontent even before the words reached him.
He sat alone at his table, staring at the remnants of Eric’s letter, torn into strips but not yet burned. He had meant to feed it to the fire the night before, to erase it, but instead the fragments lingered before him like pieces of a truth he did not wish to face.
Numbers. Ships. Granaries. Singing crowds.
For the first time, the boy’s words gnawed at him. Eric was not his father, yet the letter echoed with the authority of a ruler who believed his people would die for him. Alator’s own people followed because they must, not because they loved. He had taught them to fear, and fear worked—until hunger crept in, until doubt grew roots.
A hand tugged the tent flap aside, and Veyric entered, his weathered face etched with new lines of fatigue. He bowed briefly. “Majesty. Reports from the northern scouts. Valghor has fortified its border towns. Their supply trains move freely. Their fields thrive despite the season. They are… strong.”
The word struck Alator harder than he expected. Strong. He could almost hear the whispering soldiers repeating it as they eyed their dwindling rations.
For a moment, he let silence stretch between them. His hand closed around one of the parchment strips, crumpling it until the ink smeared against his skin. “Do you think me blind, Veyric?” His tone was quieter than usual, almost measured. “Do you think I cannot see what my men see?”
Veyric hesitated, then answered with the bluntness only years of service allowed. “I think your men need victory. Soon. Or they will begin to believe Valghor’s peace is worth more than your war.”
Alator’s gaze flicked to him, sharp as a dagger drawn in the dark. Doubt clawed at the back of his mind, but he would not let it reach his tongue. Not here. Not in front of his oldest general.
He rose, sweeping the parchment fragments into the fire at last. Flames licked them hungrily, curling ink and paper into ash. “Victory will come,” he said, louder now, so that the guards outside the tent might overhear. “But surrender will never cross my lips. If Eric thinks I will kneel, then he does not yet understand the bloodline of Vice.”
Veyric bowed, though his eyes betrayed unease. “As you command, Majesty.”
When the general left, Alator stood motionless, watching the last shred of the letter collapse into embers. The heat warmed his face, but could not chase the cold knot in his chest. Doubt had touched him—he could not deny it. But doubt was weakness, and weakness was death.
Better to die a king defiant than live as a boy’s conquered shadow.
Alator straightened his cloak and stepped outside. Soldiers stiffened at his presence, conversations breaking off mid-word. He let them see only confidence, his stride purposeful, his voice steady as he called for his captains.
Inside, the doubt still whispered. But his men would never hear it.
By evening, the campfires painted the fields in dull orange light, smoke curling into the bruised sky. Alator stood before his assembled captains, his cloak snapping in the wind. Rows of soldiers watched from beyond the circle, their eyes hollow from hunger, their armor dulled with grime. The air reeked of damp wool and stale broth.
Alator raised his arm for silence. “Valghor believes it can mock us with gifts of food and drink, as if we were beggars to be bribed!” His voice carried, harsh and jagged. “They think themselves generous, noble—while they spit on our name.”
A few men shifted uneasily. Others murmured. Many had eaten heartily from those very wagons. Alator saw the hesitation in their faces, and it stoked his fury.
He turned to the captains, his expression hard. “Find the men who dared speak of Valghor with admiration. Drag them before the army. If they are so eager to kneel at Eric’s feet, let them kneel in the dirt with their throats cut.”
The murmurs stopped. Silence rippled outward, heavy as a shroud.
“Majesty,” one captain dared to say, his voice cautious, “perhaps the men only meant—”
Alator’s glare silenced him. “No excuses. Doubt spreads faster than fire. Stamp it out, or I will stamp you out beside them.”
The captain bowed stiffly, though his jaw clenched tight. He turned to carry out the order.
Satisfied, Alator strode forward to address the army directly. “You think Eric loves his people? Then let me show you what love brings. Love makes kings soft. Love feeds strangers while his enemies sharpen their blades. But I—” He thumped his chest with a fist. “I will make you feared. I will make our name carved into the bones of Valghor.”
A few men shouted in support, though their voices rang hollow, born of fear more than devotion. Alator mistook it for loyalty.
Later that night, by torchlight, the accused were dragged into the mud before the watching soldiers. Some cried out for mercy, swearing loyalty. Others cursed Valghor’s name to prove their innocence. None were spared. Alator gave the order, and blades flashed. Blood soaked the earth, steam rising in the cold.
The camp was quiet after. Too quiet. No laughter, no songs. Only the sound of shifting feet and the crackle of dying fires.
Alator stood at the edge of the c*****e, his chin raised proudly as if expecting cheers. Instead, he was met with silence. His men obeyed, but their eyes told another story—fear, yes, but also something colder. Resentment.
Alator saw it and mistook it for awe. “Remember this night,” he declared, his voice booming over the hush. “Valghor feeds you bread. I will feed you victory. And when we march, you will carve their boy-king into pieces and feast on his crown!”
He turned on his heel and left the field, convinced he had crushed dissent. But behind him, in the whispers of the dark, the seeds of doubt spread deeper than ever.They came after dusk, a ragged column threading through the gate with the cautious, guilty light of refugees in their faces. At first Eric thought they were peasants fleeing skirmishes—until the pennants caught in the torchlight and the dull glint of worn armor revealed what they were: soldiers, but not Valghor’s. Half their number limped, some bore fresh cuts, others carried the ghosted look of men who had watched friends die at their own command.
The captain who led them dropped to his knees in the cobbled yard, mud streaking his cheeks. “King Eric,” he said, voice raw with exhaustion and something like shame. “We were with Vice. We—” His words snagged. He swallowed, glancing over his shoulder as if Alator’s shadow might yet stretch across the stones. “We could not stand it. He butchered suspected dissenters in the field. He threatens our families if we stay. We would rather die by Valghor’s hand than by his.”
Sierra moved before Eric could speak, crossing the yard with quiet authority. She came down from the ramparts as the Duchess had taught her: composed, measured, and not unyielding. Up close, the men’s faces were younger than she had expected. Hunger hollowed the cheeks of some. One boy clutched a battered lute to his chest as though it were a talisman—something of home he had refused to leave behind.
Jackson watched from under the archway, every muscle taut. He did not trust rawfleeing soldiers, not after seeing how quickly hearts changed under pressure. Yet his hand hovered near his sword because that was how he spoke when words failed. Emily stood beside him, eyes steady, cataloging faces with a cunning that had little to do with years. She had served in the stores once; she noted the smell of unwashed metal, the faint residue of Vice’s standard on a torn sleeve, the way some men carried Alator’s cruelties like open wounds.
Eric stepped forward and lifted a hand. The soldiers flinched at the crown—an instinct long trained—but then an unfamiliar softness crossed their faces. They had left terror behind. They had expected no mercy in the yard of the boy-king.
“You are in my halls,” Eric said simply. “Not as prisoners, but as men. Tell me why you fled.”
Their captain—Kellan, he called himself—spoke, and the tale spilled like a broken dam. Rations had been cut, soldiers beaten for murmured sympathies, peasants burned for singing Eric’s name, men crucified as examples. When Kellan’s own brother had been dragged out and thrown before the line for refusing to steal from the villagers, something inside the captain broke. He gathered what men he could and rode through the night, following the rumor of food wagons and a king who fed his people.
“Why choose us?” one of the younger men asked, voice small. “Why not the border towns? Why risk Valghor?”
“Because your king does not hang his own for speaking,” the captain answered. “Because the Duchess fed our men with her hands and looked us in the face. Because when a lord offered poisoned bread, she did not flinch. There is honor here—or at least there is the promise of it.”
Eric listened without interrupting. He felt something he had not named before: the precise responsibility of mercy. Taking in enemy soldiers was a gamble—traitors, spies, contagion of doubt—but closing the gate on men who fled cruelty would be worse than cowardice. It would be a moral defeat before a blade had been drawn.
The Duchess arrived with the light of a lamp in her hand, though Jackson would later swear the glow that followed her was something older than flame. She did not stride, did not demand, but her presence rearranged the yard; the men straightened, some dropping their heads in shame, some staring as if they had never been seen before.
“You will be fed,” she told them, setting the lamp on a barrel. “You will be washed, and you will sleep under roofs that do not threaten you. After that, you will answer questions. We will know whether you fled the sword or fled to join a cause. We will be just. That is our law.”
There was no bluster in her voice—only the kind of certainty that steadied people like a brace. The duchess’s instruction spread through the castle with efficient calm. Servants brought blankets. Healers unrolled poultices. Stephen, who had no taste for armies, stood on the stairwell and oversaw with a quiet competence