It’s dark and cold. Max could feel a weight on his back. There is rain running down his face and dripping off his nose. The bags on his back we’re already heavy but the rain has made them so much more heavier. His legs are shaking beneath him. As he walk forward into the unknown. He can’t see to steps In front of him.The rain is to thick and the wind is to fast as it whips passes hid face. He hears a muffled voice showing at him in the dark.
Bill-hurry up Max! We have to get to the palace before it’s to late!
Max try to move faster but his legs couldn’t take it. He kept slipping on the rocks and hitting his face. He could taste blood coming from his bottom lip. He can’t move his hands otherwise he’d drop all the bags. He uses his face to pick himself up off the ground his legs shaking even more beneath him. He sees a shadow of a figure stomping towards him with nothing in his hands or on his back. He had a black rain coat on with a hood over his face.
Bill-HURRY UP!
He grabs the back of Max’s collar and throws him forward onto more wet and slippery rocks making him land on his arm he shouts in agonising pain but Bill doesn’t seem to care
Bill-get up you lazy piece of nothing!
Max-can you take some bags please? I think you just broke my arm.
Bill-stop making excuses!
Max pushes himself up once again trying so hard to keep his balance. He sees a big building in the in the distance. He hopes that’s where Bill wants to go. But he can see that it’s on some sort of hill. He knows Bill won’t help him so he’ll have to do this on his own. He stands up as straight as possible and starts marching on slowly up the hill. He kept slipping and biting his bottom lip making it bleed much more than it should but he knows once he gets up the hill he should be safe out of the storm. But Max didn’t mind the rain or wind the real storm to him was Bill. How will he get away from him? What is he up to? And will Max be strong enough to protect people? These thoughts rush through his head as he closes his eyes for the final stretch of the hill. He can feel his grip loosen holding the bags on his back. He see a light hanging over a big wooden door. He knows he almost there. But he feels a hand on his back he felt a shiver run down his spine. He gets pulled back off his feet. Bill looks him in the eye and smiles.
Bill-your about to become very useful
Bill grabs the bags off Max’s back
Bill-go knock on the door! I’ll hold these for you He says with a trustworthy voice
Max-thank you in a confused but worn out voice.
Max know Bill was up to something but he didn’t care having those bags off his back was a relief. He walked up to the door with all the energy he had left and knocked as loud as possible. But as soon as he did that he felt a great pain rush through his head. And he could feel himself fall to the floor. He could feel that back of his head throbbing. He felt a sharp pain as though he has just been stabbed by a dagger. He knows that he could get through it if he wasn’t so hungry and week but can’t stay awake much longer. He sees Bill stand over him and whispers
Bill-that’s right. Just go to sleep your my ticket into this place.
He watches as Bill walks to the door and knocks a lot harder that he did.
He closes his eyes but he tries his hardest to stay Conscience. He can hear the big wooden door open. And can hear a lot of people talking and rushing about. He can feel himself getting picked up. The person picking him up was soft and gentle but strong and powerful. He can hear many people talking but over all he hears a sweet voice as smooth as Silk he can hear that it’s a female voice and he can feel a woman kneeling down beside him stroking his head. He tries to gather enough strength to tell her something but all he can do is gasp. He can her the sweet voice talk to Bill and some other voice talking something about guarding someone. He once again feels himself get picked up. He can her the sweet voice talking to him and asking questions that he wish he had the strength to answer but couldn’t. Such as
Bunny-when was the last time you ate?
Max wanted to say
Max-it’s been weeks Bill only gets food for himself
He can hear the girl is still talking. She starts talking about how skinny Max is and how he can feel his rib cage. He can hear her talking to herself about a lot of thing but the one thing that stood out to him was when she called him cute.
Bunny-still you look quite cute i can only imagine how you look when your away.
Max is thinking to himself they same thing but about her. Such a sweet a beautiful voice must belong to a sweet and beautiful person. He can’t imagine how beautiful she is because he didn’t know anyone could be so beautiful. He wants so bad to get his strength back just to lay eyes on such a wonderful person. Just to listen to her talk and for him to answer. But he could lay there for weeks if he know she would just sit there and talk. He know that no matter what she looked like he wanted to be with her. Forever.
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