The Waiting Room - Prologue
609 Words
Eleven Nineteen
The ice made a sound Jessica would remember long after she forgot everything else.
Not a crack.
Not at first.
It was a low, stretching groan — like the lake itself was waking from a bad dream.
Eight-year-old Jessica Vale froze mid-step.
Snow dusted the surface of Lake Calder, smoothing it into something that looked safe enough to trust. The late afternoon sky hung pale and enormous overhead, the winter sun already sinking toward the tree line.
Behind her, laughter echoed.
“Jess, don’t go so far!”
Her sister’s voice.
Warm.
Breathless.
Always chasing.
Jessica turned, grinning through the pink scarf wrapped clumsily around her throat.
“I’m fine!”
She wasn’t supposed to be out this far — their father had said it twice before unloading the thermos and folding chairs near the shore.
Stay where the snow is packed.
Test the ice.
Never assume.
But children are experts at assuming.
Another step.
The groan deepened.
Jessica frowned down at the white surface beneath her boots.
“Ellie?”
Her sister was closer now, cheeks flushed from the cold, dark braid bouncing against her coat.
“Come back,” Ellie called. “Dad said—”
The sound came then.
A violent report.
The world snapped.
Ice fractured beneath Jessica’s feet in a spiderweb burst of white lines.
For one suspended second, nothing moved.
Then the lake opened.
The water was so cold it didn’t feel like water.
It felt like impact.
Jessica plunged through the surface with a scream that shattered into silence the moment the lake swallowed her whole.
The cold stole the air from her lungs.
Up vanished.
Down vanished.
There was only black water and exploding light inside her skull.
She kicked.
Thrashed.
Her mitten tore free as her fingers scraped uselessly against the slick underside of the ice.
The hole above her was already shrinking — shards bumping together, sealing.
Her chest convulsed.
No air.
No sound.
Just pressure.
Then—
Movement.
A shape breaking through the pale disk overhead.
Ellie.
Her sister hit the water hard, vanishing into the darkness toward her.
Strong arms locked around Jessica’s coat.
Pulling.
Kicking.
Dragging her upward with a strength Jessica would never understand.
The surface burst open again.
Air.
Jessica tried to inhale but coughed instead, lake water tearing through her throat.
Hands grabbed her from above.
Voices shouting.
Her father.
Someone else.
The sky spun violently as they hauled her onto the ice.
She was dimly aware of Ellie’s hands still clutching her sleeve.
Then those hands slipped away.
Jessica rolled onto her side, convulsing.
“Ellie?” she rasped.
No answer.
Her father’s face hovered above her — gray with terror.
“Stay with me, baby. Stay with me.”
But Jessica wasn’t the one disappearing anymore.
Through a narrowing tunnel of sound, she heard the words that would echo across her life:
“Where is she?!”
A splash.
Someone diving again.
Time fractured.
Seconds stretched into eternities.
Jessica’s vision tunneled as numbness spread through her limbs — deeper than cold.
Heavier.
Quiet.
Somewhere far away, she heard sirens.
Then nothing at all.
No pain.
No fear.
Just drifting.
Floating.
Stillness.
And in that stillness…
A sound.
Tick.
Tick.
Tick.
Jessica’s eyes fluttered open.
For a moment, she thought she was underwater again — everything blurred, distorted.
But above her hung a fluorescent light.
Too bright.
Too steady.
A voice murmured nearby.
“…time?”
Another voice answered.
“Eleven nineteen.”
A pause.
Then—
“Call it.”
Darkness rushed in like a closing door.
Jessica Vale died at 11:19 PM.
She just didn’t stay that way.
- Writer
