LEFT IN THE RAIN OR LEFT OUT
1850 Words
Outside the city that same night,
The rain fell hard.
Not gentle.
Not soft.
It poured like the sky itself had split open, sending cold sheets of water crashing against the empty roadside.
Anne was seen across the road side using her phone. She seemed kind of stranded and was trying to get a cab.
Anne stood there, soaked.
Her hair clung to her face and shoulders, her dress heavy against her skin, her fingers trembling slightly as she held onto her phone.
Her eyes scanned the road again.
Nothing.
No headlights.
No cars.
No help.
Her chest tightened.
Why now…?
She had left the party in a rush—no plan, no direction, just one desperate need:
To get away.
Away from Adrian.
Away from Jimmy.
Away from everything.
But now—
She was stranded.
Alone.
In the middle of the night.
In the rain.
Anne swallowed hard and quickly tapped her phone again, trying to book a ride.
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Failed.
Her heart sank.
“No… come on,” she muttered under her breath, trying again.
“Why can’t I get a damn cab?” Anne said helplessly.
Still nothing.
The rain only grew heavier.
Cold droplets slid down her neck, making her shiver.
Her dress—meant for a poolside party—did nothing to protect her from the weather or the stares of passing strangers.
She wrapped her arms around herself, trying to stay warm.
Trying to feel safe.
But something didn’t feel right.
A presence.
A shift in the air.
Then—
A whistle.
Sharp.
Close.
Too close.
Anne froze.
Her breath caught as she slowly turned her head.
A man stood behind her.
Not too far.
But close enough to make her heart start racing.
He looked… off.
Unsteady.
A half-empty bottle hung loosely from one hand, while crumpled cash rested in the other.
His eyes roamed over her slowly.
Carelessly.
Like he had already decided something.
“Hey, baby…” he slurred, stepping closer, “How much for the night?” The man said mistaken her for a prostitute.
Anne stiffened immediately.
Her grip tightened around her phone.
“I think you’ve got the wrong person,” she said quickly, forcing her voice to stay steady. “I’m just waiting for a ride, please leave me alone.”
The man chuckled.
Low.
Mocking.
“Waiting for a ride?” he repeated, looking at her up and down. “Dressed like that?”
“That’s not all you’re waiting for,” The man added.
Anne’s stomach dropped.
Her arms tightened around herself instinctively.
“I said I’m waiting for someone,” she added, her tone sharper now.
But the man didn’t move.
Didn’t step back.
If anything—
He stepped closer.
“That’s not all you’re waiting for,” he said, smirking. “Come on… don’t play hard to get.”
He brought out more cash from his shirt pocket.
He raised the cash slightly.
“I’ve got money,let’s spend the night together.”
Anne’s heart started pounding faster.
Fear crept in, slow and cold.
“I’m not interested,” she said firmly. “Please leave.”
But he didn’t.
He just stood there.
Watching her.
Drinking.
Waiting.
Like he had all the time in the world.
Anne’s fingers shook as she quickly looked down at her phone.
She needed help.
Now.
Her thumb moved quickly, dialing a number.
The familiar tone rang softly in her ear.
Once.
Twice.
Three times.
The man didn’t leave.
He just stood there.
Watching.
Anne looked up and the man was still there.
“I said I’m not, go away! ” she said louder this time, trying to sound confident. “I already called my boyfriend. He’s on his way.”
The man tilted his head slightly.
Unimpressed.
Unbothered.
He took another sip from the bottle.
And stayed.
Anne’s heart sank.
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Meanwhile—
Across the city—
Jimmy sat on the edge of his bed, still tense from the earlier confrontation with his father.
His jaw was tight.
His thoughts messy.
Nothing about tonight had gone the way he planned.
Then—
His phone rang.
He glanced at it.
Anne.
For a brief second, something flickered in his expression.
Relief?
Concern?
Maybe both.
He reached for it quickly.
But before he could answer—
The door opened.
Jimmy looked up.
And froze.
Sophie stood there.
Half-dressed.
Confident.
Dangerous.
Her swimsuit clung to her body, the thin fabric doing little to hide anything, while the lace scarf around her waist hung loosely.
Too loosely.
Before he could say a word, Sophie let go of her lace scarf hung around her waist, leaving it to fall to her toes.
Jimmy frowned.
“Sophie, what are you doing ?” he asked.
“You are Anne’s best friend,” he added
Meanwhile Jimmy’s phone was still ringing, Anne was stranded in the rain.
Sophie didn’t answer immediately.
Instead, she walked toward him slowly.
Deliberately.
Her eyes locked onto his.
“I don’t get it,” she said softly, her voice smooth. “A guy like you…”
She stepped closer.
“Incredibly charming. So powerful…”
She reached him.
Then, without hesitation, she sat on his lap.
Jimmy stiffened slightly.
“What are you doing?” he repeated.
Sophie smiled faintly trying to seduce him.
“How could someone like Anne not appreciate you like I do ?” she continued. “It doesn’t make sense.” Sophie said taking advantage of what happened earlier between Jimmy and Anne when the crowd cheered them to kiss.
Jimmy’s expression shifted slightly.
Sophie leaned closer.
“I appreciate you,” she whispered almost seductively.
Before he could react—
She took his phone from his hand.
Both ignoring who was calling,
And she tossed it carelessly onto the bed.
Anne’s call.
Ignored.
Sophie pushed Jimmy to the bed and kept taunting him with her body.
Jimmy who was never loyal to Anne, gave in to Sophie.
“I never intended to f**k my best friend’s man. But I’d be a damn liar if I said I hadn’t thought about it,” Sophie said brushing her lips again jimmy’s ear.
Dreamed about it.
Pictured it with my eyes closed, my legs spread and your fingers dripping between my thighs.
Yeah. I know that can be awkward.
And I’m not sorry.
Because every girl has their first crush but Anne happened to get to you before me, I can’t keep pretending.
“And if you don’t mind I’m here to take what rightly belongs to me,” She said smiling mischievously.
“Enough of the talking,” Jimmy said quietly biting her lip, he was already hard and couldn’t control himself again.
His hand strolling aggressively below her chest, he found her br**st, he couldn’t help but put his mouth on her nip**e. He sucked the living daylight out of her.
His mouth moved slowly from her br**st down to her va**na. He gave her a slurpy head which got her begging and moaning loud!
No protection. No mercy. Just lust and passion. He split her legs wide open, he slipped his p**is into her. He filled her and pinned her to the bed.
………
He f****d the soul right out of Sophie’s body with nothing but his knot and his hand on her hips.
“You’re mine now,” Jimmy said to Sophie who was screaming into the pillow and begging him not to stop.
He turned her around and made her begging on her knees. He put his c**k in her mouth. She sucked him with hunger.
She kept moaning his name.
“Jimmy, please more—I need it, I need your c**k.”
Jimmy snapped.
His whole body tensed as his orgasm hit like f*****g van. His c**k jerked as thick hot c*m poured out of him, splattering into Sophie’s mouth.
He groaned deep and loud, “f**k—yes—take it—take all of daddy’s c*m—so f*****g much— I’m gonna fill you up, you will never forget how this c**k felt inside you, you will smell like me for days.
He said stroking her c**t repeatedly. His middle finger circles her c**t, tight and slow, in a second her hips start rocking to it.
“Jimmy…” she said as he slipped two finger down into her hole and her p***y clienched around it like it was made for this.
She let out another moan as his fingers went deeper and faster. Jimmy growled in her ear, holding her wrist down while she squirt and cry and begged for his c**k.
His fingers were soaked, dripping with slick, making little filthy sounds that sounded in the silence of the room.
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Back on the roadside—
The rain hadn’t stopped.
Anne’s breathing had become uneven.
The call had ended.
No answer.
Her chest tightened painfully.
Why isn’t he picking up…?
She looked up again.
The man was still there.
Still watching.
Still waiting.
And now—
Closer.
Too close.
Fear wrapped around her completely now.
Her fingers tightened around her phone.
She took a small step back.
“I said leave me alone,” she repeated, her voice shaking this time.
The man chuckled again.
“You’re not going anywhere,” he said.
Anne’s heart slammed.
Panic.
Real panic.
She looked around quickly.
Still nothing.
No cars.
No people.
No escape.
Tears burned at the back of her eyes.
Where are you, Jimmy…?
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Back in the room—
Silence.
Panting.
Sweating.
Jimmy didn’t move.
Sophie’s presence was overwhelming.
Intentional.
Calculated.
Jimmy broke the silence, “I didn’t know you are a freak,” he said looking satisfied.
“Yeah I knew you’re gonna like me , let’s do this another time,” Sophia said happily
“Definitely…” jimmy replied
“You’re wasting your time on her,” Sophie added softly. “She doesn’t deserve you.”
Jimmy’s jaw tightened slightly.
“She’s my girlfriend.”
Sophie tilted her head.
“Is she?”
Silence.
Heavy.
She leaned closer.
“Because from what I saw tonight…” she murmured, “she doesn’t act like one.”
And how you f****d me shows she doesn’t treat you right.
Her words lingered.
Carefully planted.
Jimmy didn’t respond.
But he didn’t push her away either.
And that—
Was enough.
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Outside—
Anne’s world was closing in.
The rain.
The darkness.
The man.
Her breathing quickened.
Her hands trembled.
She took another step back—
But her heel slipped slightly on the wet ground.
The man noticed.
His smile widened.
“Careful,” he said, stepping forward.
Anne’s heart pounded violently.
“Don’t touch me!”
But her voice didn’t sound strong anymore.
It sounded scared.
And he heard it.
He took another step.
And another.
Closing the distance.
Anne’s back hit nothing.
No wall.
No safety.
Just empty space behind her.
Her fingers tightened around her phone.
Her last hope.
Gone unanswered.
Her chest rose and fell rapidly.
And for the first time that night—
She realized something terrifying.
She was truly alone.
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