Chapter Four: The Weight Of Wanting
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Chapter 4: The Weight of Wanting
There are two kinds of silence in this house.
The kind that makes you feel like the world stopped spinning…
And the kind that makes you feel like something is watching.
Tonight, it’s the second kind.
I sit at the edge of the bed, barefoot, tense, and trying not to check the hallway for the fifth time. I heard something earlier—footsteps that didn’t belong to me. Not heavy. Just… present.
I haven’t seen Demian since the library. Since he told me what he did to that man. Since he whispered it like a secret he wanted me to keep.
And I don’t know what’s worse: the fact that he said it, or the fact that some part of me wanted to hear more.
I pull my hair into a loose bun, get up to grab the water bottle from the desk—and freeze.
Because he’s standing in my doorway.
Leaning against the frame.
Watching me.
Dark shirt. Sleeves rolled up again. Collar open. That same expression he always wears—like he’s already imagined ten different versions of how this night ends.
“Did you sleep?” he asks, his voice low.
“No,” I say. “You?”
He doesn’t answer. Just walks into the room and shuts the door behind him.
No permission asked.
My throat tightens.
“What are you doing?” I whisper.
He steps closer.
“You want honesty?” he says. “I’m here because I can’t stop thinking about what you’d taste like if you stopped being scared.”
The air leaves my lungs in one sharp breath.
“I’m not scared,” I lied.
He laughs. Quiet and bitter.
“You tremble every time I touch you.”
“Then stop touching me.”
“I’m trying.”
I believe him.
That’s the worst part.
He walks toward me slowly. He doesn’t grab me. Doesn’t force. Just… stands in front of me, his chest rising and falling like he’s keeping something inside that wants to come out.
“You’re not the first girl I’ve kissed,” he says.
“I didn’t ask.”
“But you’d be the first I wanted to.”
My pulse hammers.
He lifts his hand. Stops just short of my jaw.
“I’m going to kiss you,” he murmurs. “Not because I want permission. But because you want me to.”
“You don’t know what I want,” I whisper.
“Don’t I?”
His thumb brushes my chin—just once.
Then he leans in.
And he kisses me.
It’s not soft.
It’s not slow.
It’s everything I thought it would be—rough, dominant, claiming.
His mouth owns mine like a promise.
I gasp into it, and he doesn’t give me room to think. Doesn’t let me pull away. Just takes what he wants, and God help me—I give it.
He bites my bottom lip, just enough to sting, and when he pulls back, I can barely stand straight.
My hands are on his chest, clutching the fabric of his shirt.
My body is on fire.
My mind is white noise.
He looks at me like he’s angry at himself.
“I told myself I wouldn’t touch you,” he says, voice low and harsh. “But every time I see you, I want to ruin you a little more.”
I don’t know what to say to that.
He reaches for my wrist and lifts it, placing my palm over his heartbeat.
“Feel that?” he says.
I nod.
“That’s not love,” he says coldly. “That’s want. That’s war.”
Then he lets go and turns toward the door.
“Don’t follow me,” he says.
And he’s gone.
I don’t move for a full minute.
Not even to breathe properly.
Because something broke between us.
And I’m scared to find out what it was.
Was it me?
I walk the halls later, barefoot again.
The castle is quieter than usual. The air is heavier.
I pass the door to his wing—the side he told me not to enter. The one with the east corridor and the photos.
And I swear…
I heard music again.
The same piano I imagined days ago.
I press my hand to the door, heart racing.
Don’t open it, Lena.
Don’t be that girl.
But I already am.
The door creaks open.
Inside, there’s only silence. Cold walls. That same woman’s portrait above the fireplace.
But no piano.
No Demian.
And no explanation for the music in my head.
I close the door—slower this time.
Because I finally understand.
This house is doing something to me.
And so is he.
I find myself on the balcony by midnight, wrapped in a blanket, eyes on the storm rolling in across the hills.
And then he’s there again.
Behind me.
I don’t even hear his footsteps anymore.
“I told you not to follow,” he says.
“I didn’t.”
He steps beside me, hands in his pockets.
We stand in silence for a long time.
“You think I’m broken,” he says.
“I think you want to be.”
He looks at me.
“You could leave,” he says.
“No, I can’t.”
“You haven’t tried.”
I shake my head. “What would I even go back to? A hospital bed that my mom can’t afford? Rent I can’t pay?”
He looks down, then back up—his jaw sharp in the moonlight.
“I’m not going to save you, Lena,” he says.
“I didn’t ask you to.”
He leans in again.
And this time, I kissed him.
Quick. Sharp. Just once.
I pull back before he can respond.
His eyes flash. But he doesn’t say a word.
He just turns and walks away.
And for the first time since I came here,
I’m the one who leaves him wanting.
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