HI Everyone. This is my very first attempt at a space sci-fi novel instead of my usual werewolf tropes. I hope you enjoy Primori and don't be afraid to leave comments as you go. Don't hesitate to let me know how I do or if anything doesn't make sense. I can only get better with your feedback.
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The machinery didn't care that it was four in the morning.
It thundered through its cycle with relentless precision, pistons driving downward, belts humming beneath steel housings polished smooth by decades of use. Heat clung to the factory floor despite the hour, carrying the familiar scents of hydraulic oil, hot metal, and ozone. Somewhere deeper in the building, another production line roared to life.
Isabella Delgado barely noticed. She crouched beside Hydraulic Press Twelve, one knee against the stained concrete, studying the exposed cylinder with the concentration of someone listening to a language no one else could hear.
The overnight supervisor had logged it as a blown seal. Most technicians would have agreed, swapped the damaged gasket, signed the maintenance report, and gone home. Most technicians would have been wrong.
She rested her fingertips against the housing, closing her eyes for a moment. There. Not a sound exactly—more a faint vibration running through the metal, almost too subtle to detect. The rhythm was wrong.
Isabella reached for the inspection light clipped to her belt and angled its beam along the cylinder. Nothing. She frowned. The pressure readings still didn't make sense. If the seal had failed first, pressure should have bled off gradually. Instead, the gauges showed intermittent spikes before the drop—a symptom that shouldn't exist unless...
She slid her fingers farther around the cylinder. A hairline fracture. It was invisible beneath the oil, impossible to spot without dismantling half the assembly. But under her fingertips she could feel the minute ridge where the steel had begun to separate.
"There you are," she murmured.
A week. Maybe less. That was all the machine had left before the fracture propagated through the housing. When it failed, thirty thousand pounds of hydraulic pressure would tear the cylinder apart. Anyone standing nearby would never have time to react.
She logged the diagnosis on her tablet. *Hydraulic cylinder fracture. Replace entire assembly. Seal failure secondary.* Estimated downtime: forty-three minutes. Estimated catastrophic failure avoided: one. She didn't bother recording that last part. The system only tracked machinery.
The automated parts lift arrived twenty minutes later with a replacement cylinder suspended inside a steel cradle. Isabella scanned the shipment, signed electronically, and got to work. Disconnect the pressure lines. Drain the remaining hydraulic fluid. Remove the retaining bolts. Support the housing. Every movement followed a sequence she knew well enough that her hands no longer needed instructions. Precision wasn't something she switched on anymore. It had become instinct.
Ruth Livingston used to say sloppy work announced itself long before it failed. *"You can always tell when someone expects another person to clean up their mistakes."* At fourteen, Isabella had rolled her eyes. At eighteen, she'd repeated the same lesson to apprentices more than once.
She loosened the final bolt, caught the weight of the damaged cylinder as it shifted free, and eased it onto the cart without letting it strike the floor. The fracture caught the overhead light now that it was exposed—barely wider than a strand of hair. Enough to kill someone.
Her report would disappear into a maintenance database before lunch. A supervisor would approve the repair. Production would continue. Nobody would know a disaster had almost happened. That was fine. Machines didn't care who fixed them. They only cared whether someone had.
By the time she tightened the last fitting, sunlight had begun filtering through the factory's high windows in pale strips of gold. She recalibrated the pressure system. Ran the diagnostics. Ran them again. Then a third time. Only after every reading matched factory tolerances did she authorize the restart.
The press came alive with its familiar rhythm. Steady. Balanced. Safe. Only then did Isabella allow herself to step back.
The morning shift was arriving now, boots echoing across the concrete. Workers drifted toward their stations carrying coffee and conversations, paying little attention to the machinery already running around them. Just the way it should be. If people noticed maintenance, something had probably gone wrong.
She cleaned her tools before returning each one to its place. Wrench. Torque driver. Inspection light. Digital calipers. Her belt was organized with almost military precision. Ruth had insisted on that too. *"If you're wasting time looking for tools, you're already behind."*
The memory arrived unexpectedly. Still sharp after four months. Some mornings grief was loud enough to stop her in her tracks. Today it settled quietly beside her, familiar as the ache in tired muscles. She let it stay for a moment. Then she closed the toolbox. Work first. Everything else later.
The employee washroom was nearly empty. Isabella scrubbed grease from her hands until the water ran clear, then looked up at the mirror. Grey eyes. Honey-blonde hair braided tightly back. Grease smudged across one cheek she'd somehow missed. Twenty seconds later the smudge was gone.
The woman staring back at her looked older than eighteen. Not because of wrinkles or hardship etched into her face. Because she'd spent too many years solving problems that belonged to adults.
She checked her comm device. 05:47. Enough time for breakfast before grabbing a few hours of sleep. Then another shift at the parts depot. Two jobs. Seven days a week. She'd stopped questioning that schedule years ago. Rent didn't care if she was tired.
Outside, the Lower Works greeted her the way it always did. Steam hissed from rooftop vents. Cargo transports rumbled overhead along elevated railways. The air carried the metallic tang of industry mixed with recycled atmosphere and machine oil—a smell visitors complained about but residents stopped noticing sometime around childhood. Factories stretched toward the horizon in every direction, stitched together by warehouses, apartment blocks, repair shops, and elevated walkways. Nothing about the district was beautiful. Everything about it was functional. People here built the things the rest of New Detroit depended on. Most of the city preferred not to think about where those things came from. Isabella had never had that luxury.
Miguel already had her breakfast waiting before she reached his stand.
"Morning," he said, sliding over a protein bar and a cup of what everyone in the Lower Works just called recycled grounds—coffee in name only, brewed from reclaimed filter waste that never quite lost its bitter, burnt edge. "You look like you've been arguing with machinery again."
"It lost."
He laughed. "I figured."
She paid, thanked him, and continued toward home. Mrs. Parker was unlocking the shutters of her repair shop. Across the street, Old Desmond sat on his usual crate outside the union hall, wrapped in the same faded work jacket he wore regardless of season. He spotted her immediately.
"Morning, Isabella."
"Morning."
"Heard Henderson's press went down."
"Back up now."
"Knew you'd sort it."
That was the end of the conversation. It didn't need to be longer. In the Lower Works, competence was praise enough.