Days passed in uneasy silence. We hadn’t seen or heard from the commandant or his soldiers since that night. The streets stayed quiet, almost too quiet, as if something dark hovered over the town waiting to strike.
Then, one evening—just after we had tucked Theo into bed—loud, forceful knocks slammed against the front door. The sound echoed through the house like gunfire.
Bang. Bang. Bang.
“Open up!”
Mabel and I froze. I felt my blood go cold.
She rushed down the stairs, and I crept to the top, holding my breath as she opened the door. And there he was—Heinrich—standing tall and stern in the doorway, flanked by two other German soldiers. His face was unreadable.
“We received a report,” he said coldly, “that this household contains banned items—English flags, symbols of resistance. Anything representing your nation is considered a threat to ours.”
My heart dropped. I knew exactly what they meant.
I spun around and ran into the small attic room where Mother used to keep her old things. I flung open her closet, and there it was—a worn wooden box tied with string. Inside were tattered Union Jack flags, a porcelain teacup with the Queen’s crest, and old papers from my father. Treason, all of it now.
I didn’t have time to think. I grabbed the box and rushed to the balcony. The air outside was sharp and cold. A tree, old and knotted, grew along the edge of the stone wall—its branches twisting close to the house.
Clutching the box tightly, I stepped over the railing, planting my feet on the thickest branch. My fingers gripped the rough bark as I inched down, heart pounding. Just as I neared the ground, I slipped—crashing onto the dirt below with a muffled thud. Pain shot through my ankle.
I could hear footsteps upstairs, voices rising. They must’ve heard the noise. I had no time.
I crawled across the garden, shoving the box beneath the thick rosebush by the fence, covering it with fallen leaves and dirt.
A second later, the back door creaked open. Light spilled out onto the yard.
I grabbed the nearby watering can, stood up, and forced a startled smile as Heinrich stepped outside.
“Sorry, sir,” I said, letting my voice shake just enough. “Is… is something wrong? I couldn’t sleep and thought the roses needed watering.”
I tipped the can, letting water splash at my feet, acting like I hadn’t just buried a box of secrets.
He stared at me—hard—his eyes narrowed as if he were trying to see through me.
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He stared at me—hard—his dark eyes scanning every inch of me, down to the muddy hem of my dress and the trembling hand still gripping the watering can.
One of the soldiers behind him stepped out, hand on his rifle.
“She was in the garden, Commandant. Could be hiding something.”
I kept my eyes wide, my voice soft and confused. “Hiding what, sir? They’re just flowers.”
Heinrich didn’t move for a long moment. His expression was unreadable—calculated, cold. But his gaze wasn’t cruel. Not exactly.
Finally, he turned to the soldier.
“Search the house. Thoroughly.”
My heart nearly stopped. But he hadn’t said garden. He hadn’t exposed me.
The soldiers moved inside. I stood still, the chill of the night settling in my bones as Heinrich took a slow step toward me.
“You were out past curfew not long ago,” he said, his voice low and sharp, yet quieter now. “And now you’re awake at this hour, sneaking around the garden.”
I looked down, trying to hide the panic behind a veil of shame. “I didn’t mean to cause suspicion. I’ve just… had trouble sleeping. After that night.”
He tilted his head slightly, watching me.
“I find it interesting that every time something seems off, it somehow involves you.”
I swallowed hard, meeting his gaze despite myself. “Is that so surprising? You’ve taken everything from us. You don’t expect us to just carry on like nothing’s happened.”
A flicker of something crossed his face—anger? Guilt? It vanished just as quickly.
“The rules exist for a reason,” he said tightly. “But not everyone understands what’s at stake.”
Then his voice softened, almost imperceptibly.
“Be careful what you risk for a memory, Miss Eleanor. Some things aren’t worth dying for.”
Before I could answer, one of the soldiers called from inside, “Nothing, sir. Just an old coat and some letters. No flags.”
Heinrich gave a short nod. “We’re done here.”
He stepped back, eyes still fixed on me. And then, without another word, he disappeared into the night with his men.
The garden fell silent.
I shut the door as their footsteps faded into the night. My hands were trembling, my knees weak. I leaned against the wall and let out a long, shaky sigh of relief.
Mabel appeared at the top of the stairs, eyes wide. “Are you alright? What happened?”
I walked over, still breathless.
"We need to hide the box, Mabel. We can’t wait for the next time. One day, it’ll get us killed.”
She didn’t argue. She just nodded, her lips pressed into a tight line.
We waited in silence until we were sure they were gone—the soldiers’ boots had stopped echoing on the stone road, and the street outside was once again still.
Then we crept into the garden, the moonlight silvering the earth beneath our bare feet. I led her to the rosebush where I had hidden it. Together, without saying a word, we dug into the soil with our hands, dirt collecting beneath our nails.
Finally, we buried the box—deep this time—and packed the earth tight over it.
We sat there for a long moment, staring at the freshly covered spot. It felt wrong. Like we were burying our parents all over again.
“I couldn’t destroy it,” I whispered, tears stinging the back of my eyes. “It’s all that’s left of them.”
Mabel placed a hand over mine. “I know. We’re not letting go—we’re just keeping it safe.”
The wind brushed past us, soft and cold, and for a brief second, it felt like our mother’s voice in the breeze.