My Hopeless Tears

284 Words
Can you feel the anger that is boiling inside of me? Can you feel the hurt that is seeping out of me? Can you sense the pressure of pain kept inside? Do you know what its like to just want to hide? Can you feel the wetness of my tears? The lonliness in my heart? The sanity that's breaking because I am torn apart? Do you understand the meaning of of the fear that pierces deep? The awkwardness and hopelessness that keeps me from my sleep? What does it take to reach you? To fix whats not right? What does it take to change it? To shine some light? Please help me. Please show me. Please love me. Just hold me. I can See Myself I can see myself. Reflected in your eyes. Something you won. Like some kind of prize. The mouth that kisses mine. Sweet and steady. Can spit poison at me. Whenever you are ready. The arms that hold me. Close to your body. Can quickly push me away. And the heart that beats in your chest. Is killing me today. Hi! I'm not super new to w*****d but I am not one of those seasoned app users yet, either. Any suggestions? How do you feel about my approach? Tips would be appreciated! I don't mind constructive criticism at all. A lot of this is kinda short and the app keeps reminding me of this. Are you ok with small chapters? What do you think about my cover? You're right..I have no idea what I am doing in that area. I'll get better, promise! If you like my work, please be a doll and send me a vote. Thanks so much!
Free reading for new users
Scan code to download app
Facebookexpand_more
  • author-avatar
    Writer
  • chap_listContents
  • likeADD