Yes — Xena should feel like a character with presence, not simply the maid who walks in to deliver a message. I’d give her confidence, intelligence, a little mystery, and a moment that makes the prince notice who she is, not just that she’s beautiful.
INT. PRINCE’S CHAMBER — NIGHT
The PRINCESS sat beside her brother, completely absorbed in his stories.
PRINCE
And then we reached the northern mountains. The journey took longer than expected, but the view from the top—
The door opened.
XENA stepped inside.
She paused at the entrance, taking in the room before her eyes settled briefly on the Prince.
For a moment, neither spoke.
Xena lowered her gaze and gave a graceful bow.
XENA
Your Highness.
The Prince studied her.
There was something about the way she carried herself. She wasn’t nervous. She wasn’t overly eager to impress him.
She simply stood there, composed.
PRINCE
Was she here before I left?
The Princess shook her head.
PRINCESS
No. She joined the palace the month you left.
She smiled toward Xena.
PRINCESS
She’s Xena, my personal maid.
Xena gave the Prince another small bow.
XENA
It is a pleasure to finally meet you, Your Highness.
The Prince noticed the word finally.
PRINCE
Finally?
Xena’s expression remained calm.
XENA
I’ve heard enough stories about your return to know everyone has been waiting for this day.
The Princess laughed.
PRINCESS
She’s been listening to palace gossip again.
XENA
Only the useful parts, my lady.
Gideon, who had been hanging the Prince’s ceremonial robe, glanced at her.
A faint smile tugged at his mouth.
GIDEON
That’s quite a skill.
Xena looked at him.
XENA
One has to be careful in a palace, Gideon.
The Prince looked between them.
PRINCE
You two know each other?
Gideon shook his head.
GIDEON
Barely. I only met her briefly before leaving joining you. I can’t say I know her.
Xena’s eyes met Gideon’s for a brief moment.
There was something unspoken in the look.
Then she turned back to the Princess.
PRINCESS
Xena, you need my attention?
XENA
Yes, my lady. The royal tailor has arrived with the dresses. She asked that you come before she starts threatening to dress you herself.
The Princess laughed.
PRINCESS
She wouldn’t dare.
XENA
She said the same thing about you last time.
The Princess stood.
PRINCESS
Then we’d better go before she becomes impatient.
Xena stepped aside to let her pass.
As the Princess reached the door, Xena turned back toward the Prince.
XENA
Welcome home, Your Highness.
This time, the Prince smiled.
PRINCE
Thank you, Xena.
She gave him a knowing little nod before following the Princess out.
The door closed.
Silence.
Gideon slowly turned toward the Prince.
GIDEON
I’ll pretend I didn’t see you staring at the maid.
The Prince looked at him.
PRINCE
I wasn’t staring.
GIDEON
Of course not.
He returned to arranging the Prince’s robe.
A beat.
GIDEON
She’s interesting.
The Prince glanced toward the door.
PRINCE
Yes.
GIDEON
Beautiful too.
The Prince was quiet for a moment.
PRINCE
Yes, she is.
Gideon gave him a knowing look.
The Prince quickly changed the subject.
PRINCE
I missed home.
Gideon’s expression softened.
GIDEON
Home missed you too.
The Prince looked once more toward the door through which Xena had disappeared.
For the first time since returning, something other than home occupied his thoughts.