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Things change royally ............ in this scenario it is rather literal . WHY? you ask .... well there is only one thing in the world that can explain this
'only the strongest tsunamis can bring forth the treasures hidden in deep oceans.'
As I am about to enter the apartment complex building which is in desperate need of paint, I hear heavy breathing noises and heaving. I leave the groceries at the door and head to the alley adjacent to the apartment building. A gas pipe is broken releasing methane in the air with a slight hiss. The alley is dark and someones pipe is leaking water all over the asphalt .I take a step forward but freeze in mid air. What I see there makes me run southward. I force myself to stay calm and collected . I have seen many movies to know that if I am noticed I will be killed. I hide in the shadows and observe staying as still as possible. I see 2 men dumping a bloody woman in the dumpster. From the looks of if she is breathing slowly ,pupils are dilated and she looks pale . The men quickly dump her in , shut the lid and ran to the other end of alley . An SUV comes out of nowhere , they jump in and its out of sight . Its happens so fast that if not for the body in the dumpster i would have thought it was a dream or an illusion . I contemplate my options here , either I could run and pretend nothing happened in which case she will die .or report to the police and let them handle it OR call an ambulance for her. In milli second I make my mind concequences be damned I will not be able to sleep knowing full well I could have helped her. I run to the dumpster and open The lid I resist the urge to puke . I feel her pulse it is very weak