this is my first book plz do not judge the book but i would love some off your opinion for thing s i have messed up on

This is my first story hope you guys like it and plz dont mind the miispelling or puncution i would also love feedback to get better

This is my first story im sorry if their are some misspellings or typo im not really good with puncuation but im going to give it my best try and i would love feedback and everyones support