"I'm back, Lily," Ethan said.
"For what? You disappeared for five years without a word, leaving me alone to give birth to your child and raise him. And now you say you're back? What kind of joke is this?" Lily snapped.
On their wedding night, Ethan left without a word to join the military, hoping to make himself worthy of being Lily's husband. Now, after five years, he’s returned in glory, expecting a warm welcome. But instead, he’s met with harsh rejection. Worse, he's being forced into a divorce because Lily is set to marry someone else—something that sends Ethan into a rage.
This version flows more smoothly and still retains the original meaning.