Story By F.J.C
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F.J.C

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New to writing, and I appreciate any feedback about my writing skill, the plot, whatever it is. Though I\'m still learning the ropes of story writing, I do have this whole world inside my head I want to share as a writer.
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The Land Beyond the Stars: Path of Redemption
Updated at Oct 30, 2022, 23:28
The Land Beyond the Stars centers around 5 individual characters hailing from their respective origins, each with their own story. These individuals have pave down their own path & show how the event of the story unfold, allowing the audience to not only grasp the situation & the direction of the story, but also gaining a better understanding of each of these individual reasons for taking specific actions that drives the story to what it is. The story began at the Kingdom of Mirradh where Syazratul Ishtar, Princess of Mirradh & Daughter of the Great King Johan, will have her coronation in ascending the throne, succeeding her father in ruling the kingdom as well as the people. However, the event was interrupted as unknown invaders began to ravage the very heart of Mirradh. The invasion of Mirradh has shaken the land of Helios Mas, causing uproars in other kingdom to point where waging war against the other seem to be an option every world leader is leaning toward; thereby breaking the Sumpah Crest Treaty, not knowing the actual source of this threat. From this point the story is split into 5 paths; High-Commander Esther Rosalia goes down the path of "Unity", where this path focuses on building trust between nations once again & have their strength face against the true enemy. Ambassador Elize Sal goes down the path of "Statecraft", where the path focuses more on story the political issue of the war at hand rather than revealing the true intention of the story. Princess Syazratul Ishtar goes down the path of "Ascension", where this path focuses on the birthright of the Mirradhian royals & bringing Her Highness to the battlefield that rages across Helios Mas. Retainer Riza Walterius goes down the path of "Redemption", where this path focuses on her travel of self-discovery and the will to atone for the sins that she had unwillingly embraced. Betrayer Fittrye Vermillion goes down the path of "Faithless", this path focus reveals the intention of the war across Helios Mas as well as his relationship with the main antagonist of the story. Though they went down their separate path, they do intertwine with the other along the way, lending a helping hand to one another in their hour of need. The story, however, will not change as the path only reveals how the story unfolds & connects itself to another in ones’ perspective…
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