Story By ISHPU SHASTHRAM
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ISHPU SHASTHRAM

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Village curse part 1
Updated at Nov 17, 2025, 06:33
PART 1 — “THE RETURN” (≈1200 words) The bus shuddered as it crawled up the narrow hill road, its old engine groaning like something alive. Mira Devlin pressed her forehead against the cold window and watched the landscape roll past—dense trees, crooked shadows, and the faint outline of the village she once called home. Ten years. A decade since she’d left this place behind. A decade since her parents disappeared without a trace. The signboard appeared slowly through the fog: WELCOME TO WILLOW CREEK Where the Woods Whisper Stories Mira exhaled sharply. The slogan had always unnerved her as a child. But this time, it felt like something was actually whispering—soft and slow—just beneath the rustle of the leaves. She shook the thought away. The bus hissed as it stopped at the empty station. The driver turned around and gave her a strange look, one she couldn’t quite read—pity? Fear? Warning? “You sure you’re gettin’ off here?” he asked. Mira forced a smile. “It’s home.” The driver didn’t smile back. He simply nodded and muttered, “If you say so,” under his breath. She stepped into the misty afternoon, dragging her bag behind her. Willow Creek was smaller than she remembered—narrow roads, old brick houses, and that faint smell of rain-soaked earth that always lingered. But something had changed. The silence. A village was supposed to have noise—children playing, shop doors creaking, neighbors arguing, dogs barking. But Willow Creek was silent. Completely silent. Even the crows resting on the power lines seemed unusually still, watching her with eerie interest. Mira tightened her grip on her backpack. This is just how small towns are, she told herself. Quiet. Reserved. Nothing more. She walked down the familiar lane, passing houses she used to visit as a child. Curtains shifted. Doors closed. Shadows moved hurriedly away from the windows. It was as if the villagers didn’t want to be seen. Or worse— didn’t want to see her. The first person she encountered was Mrs. Halden, the old woman who used to bake her lemon cookies. Mrs. Halden stood outside her house, sweeping the porch. Mira felt a surge of relief. “Mrs. Halden?” she called out, smiling. The woman froze. Her broom clattered to the ground. Slowly, she looked up. Her eyes widened in horror. “M-Mira Devlin…” she whispered, her voice trembling. “You came back.” Mira nodded hesitantly. “I… yes. I needed to.” Mrs. Halden backed away as if Mira were contagious. “You shouldn’t have returned,” she said quickly. “You shouldn’t be here at all.” Mira blinked. “Why? What happened? Is it about my parents?” The old woman swallowed hard, gripping the edge of her doorframe. “Child… go back. Leave before nightfall. Willow Creek isn’t safe for you anymore.” “What are you talking about?” But Mrs. Halden didn’t answer. She hurried inside and slammed the door shut. The lock clicked loudly. Then another lock. Then the sound of a heavy bolt sliding into place. Mira stared at the door, stunned. “What the hell…?” The wind picked up suddenly, sharp and cold, sending leaves swirling around her feet. She rubbed her arms, trying to shake off the chill. Maybe Mrs. Halden was just old and paranoid. Maybe everyone here had become overly cautious. Rural towns were odd like that. Still, a knot of unease tightened in her stomach. She continued walking. The closer she got to her old home, the heavier the atmosphere became. The road narrowed into a quiet street lined with tall pine trees. Their branches reached over the path like bony fingers, blocking out most of the sunlight. Then she saw it. Her house. The Devlin residence stood at the end of the street, just as she remembered: pale blue walls, cracked white windowsills, and the slanted roof her father always promised to fix but never did. Time had taken its toll—the paint was peeling, the fence had collapsed, and ivy crawled up the sides like dark veins. But what made her freeze wasn’t the house itself. It was the front door. Wide open. A slow creak echoed as the wind pushed it slightly back and forth. Mira’s breath hitched. Had someone broken in? She hesitated, then stepped toward the entrance. The floorboards groaned beneath her weight as she entered. The house smelled exactly the same—dust, old wood, and something faintly metallic. The living room was untouched. The same faded sofa. The same bookshelf filled with her mother’s collection. Even the crocheted blanket still lay folded in the corner. It was as if time hadn’t passed at all. A strange déjà vu washed over her. She walked deeper inside, her footsteps echoing unnaturally loud. The sunlight leaking through the windows felt dimmer, swallowed by the shadows that stretched along the hallways. When she reached the kitchen, she froze. The radio. Her father’s old radio. The one he used to play every morning. It was on. Static crackled softly through the speaker—shhhhhh… shhhhhh…—even though no one had touched it in years. Mira step......,.......,.................. Part 2 is coming soon.
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