The Labyrinth of the Beasts CityUpdated at Nov 22, 2023, 18:35
Your translation is quite good, but I've made a few adjustments for clarity and flow:
Gao Yang, an orphan, traversed to a "Parallel World" at the age of six and has been living in a warm family of five ever since. At eighteen, Gao Yang accidentally unravels the truth about this world: it's not a parallel dimension, but a mysterious realm where everyone around him, family and friends alike, are dreadful "beasts"! Upon discovering this truth, Gao Yang narrowly escapes death, crucially gaining the [Luck] system—a power that grows the longer he survives. Thus begins a deadly game between the lamb and the wolf.