I’m an eighteen years old guy who loves writing and whose native language is not English. This is the most basic information there is, aside from how I look like, not that that’s necessary for reading what I make. I’m improving, but if you delve into the stories of mine, be prepared to see different sorts of mistakes. I accept the criticism if it is presented in a polite way. But as I cross-publish stories from Wattpad as many others, my stories are sometimes finished and there is nothing you can change plot wise.
Anyways, I will be glad to know your opinion on what I put my effort into. Even if it’s a critique.
The day for Samantha did not begin well, the crowd was merciless, and mixed with many prejudices and frightened obliviousness it was a potentially harmful cocktail. She would have been burned on stake, and to save the witch only one force could ever rise. Too sad it was a quite unpredictable dark force.
There are many ways of dealing with the world around. Some are more nasty than others. Mr. Presley maybe took it too far, but that wasn't really his fault. A dead walking among the living, without the latter knowing about his condition. But his lone and confused existence on the crossroads is changed when the beautiful creature from the world behind what the eye catches can help him with that. They may learn a lot from each other