I am new at this, so sorry for the grammar. I am still working on fixing all them but I wanted to see what ppl thought about these two chapters. This is my very first book! I am hoping to create more in time and fix my errors. So please be patient with that part. Everything done on my phone right now. Soon I will have a new cover for my book. I also draw on my free time. Please leave me comments of what you thought of the book. Thanks
Lyana 16 dark brown eyes could almost call them black, skin is a nice bronze brown, black long hair and a hour glass body shape one of the perfect she-wolves most guys go for but has a fiercely Bad attitude, competitive, honest & pure at heart but was trained to be deadly. Lyana, is part of a pack more of a tribal but not ur typical one.
Paval Age 15 A playboy, kind but fierce, blue eyed ( like the ocean), & sandy blonde hair, very handsome and a warrior from one of the largest pack of the world (the Blue blood moon pack.) His there best warrior that u could get! Paval of course wants nothing to with his mate either! His life is training, gaming and killing, but is surprisingly no much of a party goer or drinker like most would think, his more into gaming on his free time and small hangout with friends! His top of his class!