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Michel was born into a family of wealth and power. His father was a successful businessman and a druglord. about five months after his mother had just gave birth to a boy, their house was attacked. He was in the cellar when the incident happened. by the time he got into the house, his parents had been killed. he swore revenge. He was just seven years old when he was orphaned. the extended family took over the business and empire and he was sent to go and live in an orphanage. there he met two brothers Sam and Dave. they became friends and were always together. at the age if 18, they all had to leave the home. he decided to recruit into the army. his friends also decided to join him. after rigorous training, they were part of the few selected to form a special force. he met Bethany in the army. on an operation, they were separated. he could barely escape with his life. he was rescued by the villagers who passed by him. Bethany was saved by a man. she was hospitalized. when she regained consciousness she saw the one who saved her and felt very indebted. the operation was later covered up and regarded as a rouge mission. it dawned on her that she no longer had a place in the army. the one who saved her gave her a job as his personal gaurd. Michel had to stay low so as not to attract too much attention. One day, he received an anonymous call. the person narrated his story and how he has been monitored from the start. at this moment, he knew he had to retaliate. the caller promised to assist him in achieving his goal. he is not even bothered by the cost he's now after everyone that wronged him.