LOVE IN HIGH SCHOOL
It was a sunny morning, and Rhoda woke up with a smile as she was about to prepare to go to school when her mom told her they were changing her school.
"Rhoda, wake up. We are changing your school today," Rhoda's mom said.
"Mom, why? Is Transmon not good enough?" Rhoda asked.
"Is it today you're changing it? I'm tired of changing schools."
Rhoda had changed her school three times in two years. The last one, Transmon, was a good school, but Rhoda always complained about bullies. Her mom was also tired of the complaints, so she decided to change her school again.
She was 18 and, of course, in her final grade. She loved to watch the boys play basketball, and the bad thing was that Transmon boys lost to her unknown school in the inte-school finals.
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She never knew she was going to JADE High School, the school that had ruined her holiday moods. The funny thing was that Clinton was there, the boy she hated with all her heart, and she never wanted to see him again.
"Mom, what is the name of my new school?" Rhoda asked curiously.
"It's JADE, and you are going to love it. They have a great basketball court and excellent teachers," her mom replied warmly.
At this point, Rhoda felt a surge of anger, knowing her mom was taking her to her rival school.
"Mom, why do you want to take me to Transmond?" Rhoda asked. Her mom didn't respond to her feelings, insisting instead that she would love the school once she got there.
"Don't you love basketball, good labs, and nice classrooms?" her mom asked.
"I do, Mom, but there are better schools in this state. Why Transmond?" Rhoda replied.
As evening fell, her mom continued preparing her for the new school, despite Rhoda's reluctance.