Mafia Doll

Chapter 2

“Can I help you?”

The deep voice makes me turn. The doorman—broad-shouldered, perched on a stool—sizes me up with one eyebrow raised. His suit fits a little tight, but this isn’t the time for jokes.

“Hi… I’m looking for Pamela.”

“And you are?”

“Her cousin. Vanessa. She gets off now.”

His expression softens just a fraction. He pushes the door open with one hand and jerks his chin for me to go in.

The hit of music goes straight through my chest. Red lights, smoke, bodies moving pressed together like the beat is breathing them. I get it instantly: this isn’t just a bar. It’s night territory.

I take a second to get my bearings. To the left, a long bar; in the back, the dance floor; above, a mezzanine with couches and curtains that don’t hide a thing. In the center, a chrome pole over a small circular stage. The light falls like colored blades and slices the darkness into strips.

She appears out of the shadows as if someone had said my name to summon her. Pamela. Her blond hair—the same one Auntie tamed with dye—flares under the spotlight. The music drops to a pulse that marks her hips. She’s in minimal lingerie, topless; the light skims her torso in flashes. She circles the pole like she’s known it all her life: hands up, the sole of her foot climbing the metal, an arch of her back that draws out shouts and bills. From the direction of the spotlights, I know she can’t see me. I, on the other hand, see her completely. I recognize her by the mark on her lower back and by something even harder to bear: that way of smiling at nothing so she won’t break.

I freeze. A cold gnaws at me from inside. Maybe I came to confirm a rumor; instead, I find a certainty.

When the song ends, someone scoops up money from the edge of the stage. Pamela slips through a black curtain at the side, swallowed by the penumbra. I move on instinct, not courage. I skirt the floor toward the hallway. An employee in a black T-shirt blocks me without even looking at me.

“Backstage, no,” he says, mechanical.

“I need to see Pamela. I’m family.”

“Backstage is for staff and customers with wristbands.”

“It’s an emergency.”

“It isn’t.”

I feel a current of anger and fear surge up. “What do I have to do to—?”

“Buy time.” He points at an acrylic price menu behind him without lifting his back from the wall.

I don’t have that money. I don’t have that time. I push a little harder, literally. “Five minutes. Just five.”

He barely turns his torso. “I said no.”

Someone brushes past my shoulder, pushes a door that beeps. I slip into the gap like it’s air: I stick to his back and cross before the lock sounds again. The employee catches my wrist too late; I yank free like it burns.

The hallway is narrow, old carpet, photos stuck up with tape that no longer sticks. Muffled laughter leaks from behind numbered doors. Other doors thrum with different music, like each room has its own night. I walk fast, don’t think. I knock on the first, the second. No one opens. At the third, the inner curtain lets out a thread of sweet smoke. I push in.

Pamela is there, dancing for a man in a private room, under a light dimmer than the rest of the club. There’s a couch, a table with glasses, a slack curtain, and the minimum distance between her body and his. I won’t describe more. I don’t need to. The way the client leans in, that hand getting too possessive, and Pamela’s response so deliberately seductive are enough.

“Pam,” I say, and my voice sounds like someone else is speaking for me.

She turns, incredulous. In that flash of surprise, there’s shame, anger, relief, all at once. She covers herself as best she can with a garment waiting on the table, pulls her knee off the couch, and lowers her gaze. The man complains without raising his voice, with that tone that pretends to be polite and only confirms a habit: that everything is at his service.

“This isn’t your shift here,” he says, looking at my clothes, not my eyes.

“It’s not your call who comes in,” I answer. The line comes out steady, though my legs are shaking inside.

Pamela steps forward and puts her body between the client and me, as if she could soften the hit.

“Vanessa, please,” she whispers, and now she does look at me, exhausted and scared.

The employee from outside shows up with another guard. The scene freezes for a second: four people and a silence heavier than the music outside. I raise my hands without a fight, but I don’t move.

“I’m leaving,” I say, but I point at my cousin. “She’s coming with me.”

The client makes a gesture of annoyance and reclines on the couch, like this is a minor hiccup in a long night. “Finish your… business outside. Scram.”

Pamela nods as she slips on a robe. Her chin trembles; she pulls herself together with a sloppy knot. One guard starts to say something; the other stops him with a brief look—the look of someone who’d rather avoid an unnecessary problem.

We walk out together. The hallway swallows us, and the club’s noise slams back in. We walk tight, shoulder to shoulder, to a side door that leads to a flight of stairs and then to an exit with a gulp of cold air.

We stop there, half outside, the city dimmed like a backdrop. There’s no speech that fits what I saw. No question that doesn’t sound like an accusation.

“I thought you were a waitress,” I say at last, without edge, barely a thread of voice.

Pamela closes her eyes. Breathes. Nods once, slow, like surrendering to a truth she’d rather bite.

“I didn’t want you to see me like this,” she says. She doesn’t add more.

“This isn’t safe,” I add. I don’t add more either.

We don’t hug. We don’t cry. We just stand there, two girls in our twenties frozen in a service doorway, trying to figure out how you straighten a path when you’ve already taken the curve.

“Let’s go,” I say.

Pamela glances back inside, as if leaving something important hanging on an invisible hanger, and then at me. She nods. She bumps the door with her hip so it won’t slam and we go down the stairs together. I don’t know what’s waiting at the end of the block—Auntie’s questions, Grandma’s silences, shifts, bills, a future that isn’t drawn yet—but for the first time all night I feel something move in the right direction: I’m not leaving her alone. And I’m not leaving myself alone either, because I also need to learn to look at what hurts without shattering.

After fifteen minutes of a silence that rasps me raw inside, I can’t take it anymore. I try to bite my tongue—I want the whole story before I explode.

“Can you tell me what’s going on?”

Pamela bites the inside of her cheek and turns her face to the window, like there’s an exit out there I can’t see.

“Pamela, if they’re forcing you—”

“It’s not what you think,” she cuts me off, ice-cold—the cold she uses when she’s actually shaking.

I wait. The silence stretches like a thread about to snap. She doesn’t add anything. It drills through my patience.

“Then what am I supposed to think? Help me out here: I’m completely lost.”

She sighs and rubs her forehead. Her fingers tremble.

“You wouldn’t understand. You’re too… whatever.”

Too what? Naive, rigid, proper? I feel heat climb my face.

I frown. She exhales hard, like talking to me weighs on her bones.

“Maybe if you tried to explain it, I would understand,” I shoot back, hurt.

“Enough!” she finally explodes, voice broken. “I know exactly what you think of me right now. The night was heavy enough; I don’t need your judgment on top.”

“I’m not judging you,” I lie halfway, because the image of her in that place burns in my eyes. “I just want to understand. The man’s with the Zetas cartel, isn’t he? I saw the cartel tattoos, Pamela! Why are you lying to us?”

“Because I love him! Is that okay?!” The word love snaps in two and she hurls it at me like a glass that shatters.

My heart stops. All the air in my lungs turns dense.

“I’m in love with him,” she insists, and now she does look at me, with tears that don’t fall, stranded on the edge. “And I couldn’t tell you—least of all knowing how much you hate those people.”

“In love?” I whisper, the word coming out like a splinter. A cold wave combs my gut from top to bottom. Love… with who?

That criminal? No.

I go mute for several minutes. Her hazel eyes bounce from me to the road and back. I can’t speak. I don’t want to scream. I don’t know how to hold her up without collapsing myself.

She leaves me speechless.

“Pamela… we said we’d escape this misery, remember?” I point to the dirty street, the crooked posts, the busted bulbs. “We’re… we’re going to finish architecture with top grades and move to Los Angeles. That was the plan, right? You said that once we were there you’d adopt a dog. That still stands, doesn’t it?”

She doesn’t answer. Her jaw tightens. I see her clench her teeth not to cry.

I know my words reach her—I know her—but something in her fights, hard, like my dream is a luxury she can’t afford anymore.

“We want to get away from the drugs. We want out of Sunnyside and far from criminals. That’s why we don’t mess with cartels!”

She finally turns her face and holds my gaze. And in that clash, it isn’t the Pamela I know: the one who laughs loud, dances anywhere, makes even misfortune feel lighter. The one I saw on that couch wasn’t her; she was someone surrendered to the street, someone who bargained with fire not to freeze to death.

The message lands like lead: what if we don’t get out of here?

Then why not dance with the devil if it’s the only way not to burn alive?

“Listen, Vanessa,” she says at last, word by word, like each syllable costs her, “I didn’t see it coming. I can’t control it. I knew it would hurt you, so yes, I hid it. But you saw him. Antony isn’t—”

“No.” I cut her off, and I can hear my voice shaking with anger and fear. “Don’t tell me you’re in love with that psychopath. Don’t say it again. Please.”

“Vanessa, stop…”

“No. Enough.” I press my back to the door like I need a wall to keep from coming apart.

The rest of the ride is a hole. Heavy silence. The engine hums. I swallow, and guilt tangles in my throat: maybe I’m being cruel; maybe I’m not seeing it all. But there’s one thing I do see with a clarity that hurts: he doesn’t love her. At all.

I don’t shout. I don’t lecture. I speak like someone setting a beam so the roof won’t cave.

“We can’t drop out of school. In two years, we’ll be done, and we’ll move to another state. With our grades, we can go anywhere. You know that.” I draw a long breath. “I won’t say anything to Aunt Carmen or Grandma about your job. But Antony… Antony is going to wreck your life. Believe me.”

The last word trembles.

I step out before she answers. The cold air cuts my face. A few meters away is my bike, chained to the gate exactly where I left it. I walk over with my hands shaking—from anger, from fear, from love put in the wrong places.

Behind me, Pamela is still standing there. I don’t look back. I pull out the key, free the chain; the metal chills my fingers and centers me. I breathe. I swing a leg over.

“Pam…” I say, barely, without turning. “Take care of yourself.”