?"Mirror World"? A girl who accidentally went to the future.

Hey guys my name is Shweta. Im 20 year old. I like reading a lot. I always likes to read mysterious story so much so I thought of writing one. I hope you guys will like it. And i don't know much about writing so I believe you guys will give me some advice to improve my writing as well . Thank you enjoy the story ? Female character:- May Morgan May Morgan is 25 year old. She has recently lost her parents in an accident. She doesn't have a lot of friends, but she has one best friend her name is Lily. May came from a wealthy family. Her father had a successful business and after her father died May has to handle everything. Male character:- Noah Cambarn 26 year old He comes from a rich family But left he's parents Living alone, runs a new business Lily Smith:- Lily is 25 year old. She works with May She became friends with May 2 years back and now they're best friends Timothy Bradford:- He's 25 He's a childhood friend of May They went schools and collage together And they were about to get married but that didn't happen. Noah Cambarn May Morgan L ily Smith  Timothy Bradford