Price Of A promise
The last school bell rang just as Brenda Michael finished writing the final sentence on the whiteboard .
The classroom , which had been unusually quiet only a second earlier, burst into life. Chairs scraped across the floor, school bags flew onto little shoulders, and excited voices filled the room as the children hurried to begin their afternoon freedom.
Brenda set the marker on the tray and watched them with a smile that came more from habit than ease. It had been a long day, but seeing the excitement on their faces always reminded her why she had chosen this job, even when the salary barely covered her rent and transport.
"Miss Brenda"
A small hand shot into the air.
She turned to find Grace still sitting in the front row while the rest of the class rushed toward the door.
"Yes, Grace"?
The little girl frowned.
"You forgot to give us homework"
The room became quiet for a while then the children groaned together.
"Please don't remind her, We were almost free"
Brenda laughed, the sound warm enough to make even the loudest boy grin.
"Don't worry , You've all worked hard today , I'll let you escape this time".
A loud cheer erupted.
"Thank you, Miss Brenda".
The children poured out of the classroom, laughing as they disappeared into the corridor.
Only one pupil remained behind , Daniel.
He stood beside his desk, nervously twisting the strap of his school bag around his fingers.
Brenda noticed immediately.
"Daniel, is something wrong"? he shook his head
Not really.
"Then why are you still here"?
He looked down at his shoes before speaking.
Miss Brenda... will your mum be coming to our graduation next month?
The question caught her by surprise.
For a brief moment, she saw her mother's smiling face instead of the classroom around her.
She swallowed the lump rising in her throat and forced herself to smile.
" Of course she will "
Daniel's face lit up.
I told Grace she would come.
Brenda walked over and gently straightened his crooked tie.
Then you were right.
He beamed with pride before running out of the classroom, nearly colliding with another teacher in the hallway.
Brenda stood alone.
The laughter faded until only the ceiling fan could be heard turning lazily above her.
Next month , She whispered the words under her breath.
Her mother had promised they would celebrate together after the graduation ceremony.
Brenda intended to make sure that promise came true.
She packed the exercise books into her worn canvas bag, switched off the classroom lights and locked the door behind her.
The afternoon sun greeted her the moment she stepped outside.
The streets around the school were alive with movement. Parents called their children home, traders advertised fresh fruit from roadside stalls, motorcycles weaved through slow-moving traffic, and somewhere nearby a young man played an old love song from a small speaker that crackled every few seconds.
It was an ordinary afternoon.
Brenda wished her life still felt ordinary.
She checked the balance on her phone one more time.
**Available Balance: $18.42**
She stared at the screen for several seconds before locking it again.
That money had to cover transportation, food, and whatever medicine the hospital asked her to buy before the end of the week.
It wasn't enough.
It hadn't been enough for a long time.
Still, she refused to stop at the bus station.
Instead, she started walking.
If she saved the bus fare today, she could buy her mother the coconut bread she loved from the small bakery two streets away.
It wasn't much.
But these days, love had become something measured in little sacrifices.
Brenda smiled to herself and quickened her pace.
She had no idea that before the sun went down, someone would place a price on her mother's life......and another on her own.
By the time Brenda reached St. Aurora Medical Center, the afternoon sun had begun to soften.
The familiar glass doors slid open, and the cool air inside wrapped around her like it always did. The smell of disinfectant filled the corridor, mixed with the quiet hum of conversations, rolling wheelchairs, and the steady footsteps of nurses moving from one ward to another.
She signed the visitors' register without being asked.
The elderly security guard looked up from his desk and smiled.
"Back again, Miss Brenda"?
She returned the smile.
You make it sound like I have another home.
The old man chuckled.
"At this point, I think you do".
Your mother has been asking about you since lunchtime. She even threatened to report me if I didn't let you in the moment you arrived.
Brenda laughed softly.
That sounds like her.
She thanked him and made her way toward Room Three.
Every step along the corridor had become familiar over the past week. She knew which ceiling light flickered every few minutes, which window refused to close properly, and which nurse always hummed old songs while checking patients' medication.
She wished she had never learned any of it.
When she reached the door, she didn't walk in immediately.
Instead, she took a slow breath, pushed every worry to the back of her mind, and forced a smile onto her face.
Her mother hated seeing her sad.
Brenda intended to keep it that way for as long as she could.
She pushed the door open.
The television was on, but her mother wasn't watching it.
The moment she saw Brenda, her tired face brightened.
Finally.
Brenda closed the door behind her.
I'm only twenty minutes late.
Twenty-three , Her mother corrected her without hesitation.
"I've been counting".
Brenda placed a hand over her heart.
Now I'm offended. You're supposed to miss me, not calculate my arrival.
Who said I can't do both?
They laughed together, and for a little while the room no longer felt like a hospital room.
Brenda placed the paper bag on the small bedside table.
"I brought you something".
Her mother's eyes lit up immediately.
"Please tell me it isn't another apple".
Brenda pulled out the warm coconut bread with a proud smile.
"I remembered your favourite".
Her mother's expression softened.
You spent money on me again.
I spent money on food.
There's a difference.
Her mother looked at the bread for a long moment before breaking off a small piece.
You should have bought something for yourself instead.
I already ate.
It was a lie , But her mother still caught it.
You're a terrible liar.
Brenda looked away, pretending to arrange the flowers beside the bed.
I've been told I'm improving.
Not even a little.
Her mother smiled, then reached for Brenda's hand.
"Come and Sit with me "
Brenda pulled the chair closer and sat down.
For a few minutes they talked about ordinary things.
The children at school.
The neighbour who complained about everything.
The television drama her mother insisted Brenda should start watching.
They laughed so easily that it became almost possible to forget the machines quietly monitoring every heartbeat in the room.
Then her mother became unusually quiet.
She studied Brenda's face carefully.
You're tired.
I'm fine.
Brenda answered too quickly.
You're working too much.
It's only temporary.
Her mother squeezed her hand gently.
You've been saying that for years.
Brenda lowered her eyes.
"If I don't work, who will pay the bills "?
Silence settled between them.
Not uncomfortable.
Just honest.
After a while, her mother spoke again.
Brenda...
Hmm?
If things become too difficult...
Don't finish that sentence.
Her mother's smile faded.
Brenda looked up, her voice firmer now.
You're going home.
"You're going to complain about my cooking again ".
"You're going to sit in the front row at Daniel's graduation because I already promised him you'd be there".
Her mother blinked , Daniel?
"One of my pupils".
"He asked about you today".
A faint smile returned to her mother's face.
"You'll have to embarrass me by telling everyone I'm still too skinny".
"I will , and you'll pretend not to enjoy it" .
Brenda laughed.
A gentle knock interrupted them.
Both women turned toward the door.
A doctor stood outside with a patient file tucked beneath his arm.
His smile was polite.
"Miss Michael"...
"May I have a word with you"?
Brenda looked at her mother, then back at the doctor.
Something in his expression made the smile disappear from her face.
She stood slowly.
"I'll be right back, Mom".
Her mother nodded, but as Brenda followed the doctor into the corridor, an uneasy feeling settled in her chest.
She couldn't explain why.
She only knew that the doctor's eyes carried the kind of weight that never arrived with good news.