Dark's Past

Hi this is my first story so please tell me if their is any grammatical errors or suggestions. I can't promise a constant update because of whats going on but I hope to get at least two updates a week. Intro: You are the only one that can choose what happens in your life. No not me my life and freedom was taken from me but  the people that were suppose to care didn't. Instead the just watched and laugh while breaking me apart. "You are so crazy" she said to me " your mine and only mine so you will have to deal with my crazy ness." He was known among all but not seen. She was known by none but seen by many.