Chapter 1: Disjointed Breath
Present Line: Awakening on an Alien World
Mars Base Olympus Dawn
March 17, 2049 – 06:12
The world came back to Jack Hawk in fragments.
A suffocating weight on his chest. A foul, acidic taste coating his tongue. The low, rhythmic hum of life-support machinery. He cracked open his eyes, greeted by a fisheye view of the medbay—wires and tubes drifting like jellyfish tendrils in the microgravity.
His stomach lurched.
Jack turned his head just as another violent wave overtook him. A sphere of bile—thin, brown, and flecked with half-digested protein rations—escaped his lips, spiraling slowly before colliding with the inside of his oxygen mask. A wet pop.
Breathe.
Instinct kicked in. Jack’s hands moved in a sequence drilled into his muscle memory—NASA’s four-step zero-G emesis protocol. He reached for the containment cloth clipped to his medical harness, wiped his face, secured the sick, and stowed it in the designated disposal pouch. Efficient. Professional. Even as his body rebelled, his training held.
Only then did he let himself register the numbers on the medbay’s digital wall display:
O₂ Remaining: 69h 43m
Date: 2049-03-17
Jack’s fingers twitched. Forty-nine? That wasn’t right. It should be 2035. It should be launch day.
He exhaled sharply and ran a shaking hand down his torso, feeling for the familiar shape of his equipment. Something small and smooth bumped against his palm. He retrieved it from his chest pocket. A rock. A simple, unremarkable Martian pebble, red-brown and polished from worry.
That wasn’t right either.
Jack’s breath quickened. His left hand instinctively sought the ring finger of his right, pressing against the cool metal band wrapped around it. The wrench ring. Sears, No. 8. Oklahoma-made. The same one he’d slipped off before the accident.
Before the explosion.
His pulse thundered in his ears as he glanced down at his suit. Then he saw it. Stitched over the left breastplate, where his own name should be, was a single word:
CLAIRE
The breath caught in his throat.
Behind him, a voice stirred in the darkness.
A whisper.
In Russian.
“Клэр, не бойся…”
Claire, don’t be afraid.
Jack twisted toward the sound. Emily Chen-Hawk’s eyes fluttered open, unfocused but calculating. Even in disorientation, her mind moved like clockwork, her training as an astrophysicist dissecting their circumstances.
Her lips parted as she did the math aloud:
“From December 24, 2035, to March 17, 2049... 5,193 days…” She inhaled sharply. “Divided by a Martian year… roughly 3.2 Earth years.”
Her gaze locked onto Jack’s, the weight of realization dawning between them.
They shouldn’t be here.
And yet, they were.
Flashback: Shadows Over Kennedy Space Center
December 24, 2035 – 14:00
The astronaut dressing room smelled of metal and static charge. Emily’s reflection stared back at her from the steel locker door, pale and drawn. Her hands trembled as she adjusted the cuffs of her suit.
Jack’s voice cut through the sterile silence. “What the hell is this?”
She turned to find him holding a prescription bottle, the label unmistakable:
Emily Chen – Postpartum Depression
Emily reached instinctively for the ultrasound photo she had hidden in his toolbox, crumpling the edges in her grip.
“She’s here,” Emily whispered. “She belongs here.”
Jack exhaled, eyes darkening. “We agreed—logic, Emily. We face this with logic.”
Her fingers tightened around the ultrasound. “Logic says an embryo shouldn’t go to space. But she’s already here.”
A crackle over the intercom.
“Attention crew. All personnel report to Sublevel One. Solar storm alert upgraded to Red.”
Jack’s jaw clenched. “We don’t have time for this.”
Neither did their daughter.
Present Line: The Altered Records
Mars Base Olympus Dawn
March 17, 2049 – 06:41
Jack focused on the medbay terminal, his breath still uneven. The screen displayed two patient records:
John Hawk / Emily Hawk
Status: Olympus Dawn Founders
Missing Since: May 21, 2046
Jack’s blood ran cold. He tapped at the screen, searching for further information, but a movement outside the medbay window stopped him.
Three figures. Small.
Children.
They stood outside in the dim Martian dawn, makeshift helmets assembled from old mechanical joints, their oxygen valves repurposed from Olympus Dawn’s first-generation EVA suits.
Emily inhaled sharply beside him. “They’re… using Blue’s arm joints.”
Jack barely heard her. His attention had zeroed in on one particular detail:
A small girl. Standing at the front.
Brown eyes. A pink stuffed bear tucked under her arm. A missing button replaced with something eerily familiar—Jack’s NASA mission patch from 2035.
She lifted a hand and pressed it against the glass, fingers tracing shapes in the Martian dust.
A family.
Three figures holding hands.
The tallest one had a wrench in his grip.
Chapter Cliffhanger: A Message from the Past
A metallic knock echoed through the medbay.
Knock. Knock. Knock.
Then a giggle. Then a hiss—oxygen venting from a valve.
The knocking resumed, more deliberate this time. A pattern.
S.O.S.
Jack’s breath caught. A pause. Then three extra taps. Short. Crisp.
C.
The first letter of her name.
On the wall, Blue’s old robotic limb flickered to life, projecting a log entry onto the medbay bulkhead:
2046.05.21 – 23:59
Dr. Hawk instructed me to delete today’s records. She said:
“When they wake up, make sure Claire believes we were heroes.”
Jack turned toward the girl outside.
She was smiling.
Behind her, scrawled in small handwriting beneath the date March 17, were six simple words:
Mom and Dad said they’d come home.