Special: First Drafts 20
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself tuhat, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 20: Doll’s Hometown (First Draft)
Lucas trailed to the hall and noticed the strange atmosphere. Doll was looking enthusiastic and animated.
"What's up with you?" Lucas asked Doll who's already standing by Moon's side.
Doll withdrew her eyes from the map she's holding and turned to him. "It's the last day of the month."
