Special: First Drafts 19
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself that, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 19: Lamia High’s Festivities (First Draft)
This noon, there was not a cloud in the clear bright sky. Following Principal Lyns's lead, the selected participants headed for the Lamia High's Feast.
It was a rural place far from the city. The selected participants' chartered bus circled along the winding rural road, the paths
