Special: First Drafts 18
I find it funny how I drastically change a chapter after another. I tend to make a change, then as I reread it, will change that again after another. I spend so much time trying to polish and solidify a chapter before convincing myself tuhat, in my head, it should be right.
So, here was the first drafts series of my Novel for you to see how I make changes and how it changed from the first draft from the final s***h published chapter.
Chapter 18: Celebration with Fury (First Draft)
Doll, hearing Moon whispered Lunar Invel's name, take a look at the man. She clearly remembered what Moon had told her. Lunar Invel was one of the adopted children of his parents.
As the students applauded, Moon and Lunar share a mutual gaze. It was cold but furious. Lunar continued
