Pride- the man in the mirror
Elliot Crane was a man who needed no one. At least, that’s what he told himself. A successful architect with a penthouse view and a wine collection older than his grudges, he wore pride like a tailored suit. Friends? He didn’t need them. Lovers? Temporary. He was a fortress built on ego, and in his own eyes, flawless.
But on the eve of his 40th birthday, something changed.
It began with the mirror.
A gift had arrived with no name, just a note: “For the man who sees only himself.” Elegant, full-length, framed in blackened mahogany—Elliot couldn’t help but admire it. But as days passed, his reflection began to shift. Not in the ways mirrors play tricks, but deeper. It smirked when he didn’t. Blinked out of sync. And sometimes… it whispered.
At first, he blamed stress. Long hours, sleepless nights. But the reflection grew bolder. It began mouthing words when Elliot wasn’t speaking. Coward. Fraud. Alone.
One night, after returning from a gallery opening where he’d basked in shallow praise, the reflection laughed. “They don’t love you. They fear you.” Elliot screamed and shattered the glass. But there it was—his image still grinning through the shards.
Then came the dreams. Hallways of mirrors. Himself, older, rotting, chased by the sound of his own name. Elliot stopped sleeping. He stopped working. He covered every mirror, but the whispers followed—through windows, puddles, polished silver.
Driven to the edge, he returned to the black-framed mirror and pleaded. “What do you want?”
The reflection smiled, reached out—and pulled him through.
Now Elliot is gone. The penthouse is silent. But the mirror remains.
And sometimes, when the moon is right, a new reflection appears. One that looks proud. One that doesn’t know it's already being watched.