bc

Vortex of the Void: The Rebirth of the Exiled

book_age18+
1
FOLLOW
1K
READ
dark
mythology
like
intro-logo
Blurb

In Gold City, a sprawling metropolis where every person’s fate is dictated by the rank of their guardian spirit, Eldrian is nothing more than an insignificant youth from the mining district. Yet, when the Day of Awakening arrives, Eldrian does not summon a majestic guardian. Instead, he awakens the Veil—a pitch-black anomaly deemed a disgrace and a defect by the world's established order.

Cast out and humiliated by the elite, Eldrian realizes that his "defective spirit" is not a weakness, but a Devourer Spirit—an ancient entity capable of consuming energy, manipulating the laws of nature, and shattering spiritual hierarchies. In a world built upon foundations of lies and oppression, Eldrian must navigate treacherous political intrigue, uncover buried mythological secrets, and transform from a hunted fugitive into the nexus of a new cosmic balance.

chap-preview
Free preview
Echoes in the Abyss
The air in the Lower District’s crystal mines was not meant for human lungs. It was a thick, stagnant soup of sulfur, pulverized quartz, and the jagged, metallic tang of leaking raw energy. Every breath Eldrian took felt like swallowing needles, but he did not stop. He couldn’t. To stop was to fall behind, and to fall behind was to feel the stinging bite of Mandor Kaelen’s electrified whip. Eldrian braced his boots against the slick, uneven floor of Tunnel Sector 42. He was a shadow among shadows, his skin caked in the grey, luminescent grime of the mines. His hands, though calloused and scarred, moved with the precision of a surgeon. He wasn't mining for the heavy, low-grade crystals that the government drones hauled away to the Gilded District; he was hunting for the "thrums." A thrum was a vibration—a slight, frantic pulse in the bedrock that signaled a fragment of concentrated energy. Most miners, their spiritual senses dulled by years of grueling labor and the hopelessness of their Bronze-class spirits, ignored these minute shifts. They were too focused on the quota. Don’t look at the quota, Eldrian reminded himself, his heart hammering against his ribs like a trapped bird. Look at the cracks. He leaned his ear against the cold, damp wall. He closed his eyes, filtering out the distant sound of coughing miners and the harsh, rhythmic clanging of the steam-powered ventilation fans. There. Beneath the roar of the mine’s artificial life support, he felt it. A soft, erratic heartbeat in the stone. He pulled a small, improvised chisel from his belt and tapped the wall. Clink. Clink. Hiss. A hairline fracture appeared, glowing with a faint, sickly violet hue. Eldrian’s pulse quickened. This wasn't just a fragment; it was an overflow leak from the power conduits running deep within the crust. He glanced toward the main passage. Mandor Kaelen was busy berating a newcomer about twenty yards away, his "Wild Boar" spirit shimmering in a dull, coarse bronze aura that seemed to choke the air around him. The man was a pig in every sense, gluttonous for power and cruel by design. Eldrian shifted his body to block Kaelen’s line of sight. He reached into the crevice, his fingers brushing against something sharp and biting. He didn't pull it out immediately. He waited, letting his own internal sense—that strange, cold, persistent rhythm he had felt since childhood—align with the crystal's pulse. Just a bit more, he thought, his fingers curling around the shard. Suddenly, a massive boot slammed into the mud inches from Eldrian’s hand. He flinched, pulling back, his palm searing from the momentary contact with the unstable energy. "What are you sniffing at, rat?" The voice was like grinding gravel. Eldrian looked up into the bloated, red-veined face of Mandor Kaelen. The Mandor’s pig spirit flickered, its tusks casting long, jagged shadows against the tunnel wall. "Nothing, Mandor," Eldrian said, keeping his voice flat, stripped of all defiance. "Just clearing a blockage in the ventilation shaft." Kaelen squinted, his eyes darting to the glowing crack in the wall. He lunged forward, shoving Eldrian aside with a massive hand. The young man stumbled, falling into the slush. Kaelen jammed his own chisel into the hole, prying it open with reckless force. The crack widened, and a hiss of pressurized, toxic gas erupted, dousing Kaelen in a spray of violet vapor. He cursed, swatting at the air, his eyes watering. "Damned useless, leaking pipes! Get back to the collection point, Eldrian! If you aren't under the scale in ten minutes, I’ll strip the skin off your back myself." Eldrian didn't argue. He scrambled to his feet, bowing his head to hide the flicker of triumph in his eyes. As he hurried away, he felt the weight of the tiny, jagged shard he had managed to palm before Kaelen took over. It was small—barely the size of a fingernail—but it pulsed with a hunger that matched his own. He reached the main cavern where the transport lifts waited. The other miners were already there, exhausted, hollowed-out men and women whose eyes had lost the ability to dream. They were the "Bronze-class" forgotten, souls shackled to spirits that provided nothing but the strength to carry burdens they shouldn't have to bear. Eldrian stood at the back of the queue, his hand curled tightly around the shard in his pocket. He was seventeen. Tomorrow was the Soul Summoning Day. For most, it was a lottery—a chance to see if the cosmic dice would grant them a Silver spirit, perhaps even Gold, and an escape to the sun-drenched spires of the Gilded District above. For Eldrian, it was a death sentence or a rebirth. He felt the shard in his pocket grow warm, almost feverish. It wasn't just energy; it was a promise. He looked up, past the dark, soot-stained ceiling of the mine, imagining the massive, gilded towers of the City of Gold rising toward the sky. They were built on the broken backs of people like him, fueled by the very crystals he mined in the dark. One day, he vowed silently, the cold, rhythmic thrum in his chest synchronizing with the shard, the hunger will go both ways. He looked down at his reflection in a pool of oily mine water. His eyes, usually sharp and calculating, seemed to darken, the irises swirling with an unnatural, shadowy depth. He was terrified. He was hungry. And, for the first time in his life, he was certain that when he stepped onto the altar tomorrow, the world would have no idea what it was inviting in. The lift whistle blew, a sharp, mournful sound that echoed through the tunnels like a dying beast. Eldrian joined the press of bodies, moving toward the surface. The trial of the mine was over for the day, but the true trial—the one that would carve his name into the annals of history, or bury it in the dirt—was only just beginning. He stepped onto the cold metal plate of the lift, and as the cage groaned upward, away from the hell of the deep, he felt the shard in his pocket pulse once, twice, three times—a rhythmic declaration of war against the destiny that had been set for him before he was even born.

editor-pick
Dreame-Editor's pick

bc

Unscentable

read
1.9M
bc

He's an Alpha: She doesn't Care

read
749.4K
bc

Claimed by the Biker Giant

read
1.8M
bc

Holiday Hockey Tale: The Icebreaker's Impasse

read
982.4K
bc

A Warrior's Second Chance

read
361.7K
bc

Not just, the Beta

read
349.2K
bc

The Broken Wolf

read
1.1M

Scan code to download app

download_iosApp Store
google icon
Google Play
Facebook