TROUBLE IN HAWAII

Joshua is falsely accused and arrested in Hawaii for two deaths he knew nothing about, follow the adventure of his friends to find out what really happened within the short period of time they had in Hawaii. It's a really short but meaningful story, my second actual complete story like ever, apart from like essays and stuff. I would really appreciate if you read and left positive comment or constructive criticism to help me get better. Please share this story to your friends, family, well wishers and even enemies. Let us grow out community and space together. I am completely open to constructive criticism, feedbacks, suggestions, contributions, positive remarks and the likes of that; quite sincerely negativity is simply unacceptable here. Together, this is our safe space where we can let our imagination run wild. Introduction Trouble in paradise, why did it always have to be teenagers? Must it always revolve around them? It's like they just attract negativity towards themselves. One trip to Hawaii, a pregnancy, two deaths after and seventeen year old Joshua was now in Hawaiian Police custody for two deaths he claimed to know nothing about. Why don't we start at the very beginning of this story? Back to square one.